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Tis the Season Comment Fest

Dec 10, 2011 08:45

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Movie Night, Marcus/Esca, PG-13, (warnings: mild spoilers for Love Actually) 3/4 lallyloo December 13 2011, 08:04:56 UTC

“This guy, fuck, he should've told her.”

“Well he does tell her.”

“Yeah, but by then it's too late, she's already married to the other guy.”

“They could split up, you never know.”

Marcus turned to him, smirking. “Esca, that's awful.”

“It happens in real life, it could happen in the movies.”

“No, see, that's the tragedy of it. They both know now and there's nothing they can do about it.”

“Pfft.” Esca laughed. “Divorce.”

Marcus gave him a playful kick, nudging Esca's foot on the back of the couch. “That's mean.”

“I'm kidding.” Esca said, nudging Marcus's foot in return. He tapped against it twice, then let his foot settle next to Marcus's, the side of his foot resting against Marcus's ankle. When Marcus didn't respond or pull away in surprise, Esca left it there.

*“Bottle ( ... )

Re: Movie Night, Marcus/Esca, PG-13, (warnings: mild spoilers for Love Actually) 4/4 lallyloo December 14 2011, 23:19:40 UTC

Thanks, bb! As soon as I read your prompt I was all "OMG THEY NEED TO HAVE A MOVIE NIGHT AND WATCH CUTE THINGS." I'm glad you enjoyed it! <333

Re: Movie Night, Marcus/Esca, PG-13, (warnings: mild spoilers for Love Actually) 4/4 riventhorn December 13 2011, 16:32:25 UTC

So sweet! I loved the awkwardness yet the immediate sense of companionship between them. And the last line! Perfect! :)

Re: Movie Night, Marcus/Esca, PG-13, (warnings: mild spoilers for Love Actually) 4/4 lallyloo December 14 2011, 23:20:33 UTC

Thank you! And thanks for running the fest! <3

Re: Movie Night, Marcus/Esca, PG-13, (warnings: mild spoilers for Love Actually) 4/4 katie_andrew December 14 2011, 05:56:32 UTC

Oh my god! CUTEST CUTEST!

I THINK THIS IS WHEN YOU KISS ALL THE TIME

And the last line! ♥

Re: Movie Night, Marcus/Esca, PG-13, (warnings: mild spoilers for Love Actually) 4/4 lallyloo December 14 2011, 23:20:58 UTC

Haha I'm happy you liked this! ♥

Re: Movie Night, Marcus/Esca, PG-13, (warnings: mild spoilers for Love Actually) 4/4 kenshincha December 14 2011, 11:02:34 UTC

This was so fun. I unfortunately haven't seen Love Actually yet, but I enjoyed it all the same.

Re: Movie Night, Marcus/Esca, PG-13, (warnings: mild spoilers for Love Actually) 4/4 lallyloo December 14 2011, 23:23:01 UTC

Thanks! I wasn't sure if it would make sense without having seen the movie, so I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it :)

Re: Movie Night, Marcus/Esca, PG-13, (warnings: mild spoilers for Love Actually) 4/4 awarrington December 17 2011, 22:25:51 UTC

My first reaction at the end of that was 'eeeee' and noticed coeurdesoleil got in there considerably earlier than me! This is such a lovely feel-good story. I love how they've both been interested in the other without either of them realising and I was so glad that Marcus made the move and shut Esca up. :) The two of them quoting the film was totally adorable and the ending 'you decide' was genius! Brilliant, thank you for sharing. ♥

Re: Movie Night, Marcus/Esca, PG-13, (warnings: mild spoilers for Love Actually) 4/4 lallyloo December 17 2011, 23:09:08 UTC

Thank you! I was trying to give them their own little Love, Actually moment, so I'm very happy you enjoyed it! ♥

poziomeczka December 23 2011, 16:55:07 UTC

TO ME YOU ARE PERFECT! I finally managed to catch up with this and it's the sweetest and most heartwarming thing ever. I adore how you write Esca with a crush XD I'm always between thwacking him and awww-ing for the rest of my life.

lallyloo January 10 2012, 01:13:01 UTC

Thanks, bb! (and I'm very sorry for the late reply)

Also, your icon is incredibly adorable..

scraplove December 27 2011, 15:05:02 UTC

<3 OMG, so adorable.

lallyloo January 10 2012, 01:13:25 UTC

<333 Thanks again!

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