Re: a place in my heart (for you), Marcus/Esca, PG, 3/3bunnJuly 5 2011, 21:06:55 UTC
This is fabulous, thank you so much for writing and sharing it. I just went back to see if I had a favorite bit to mention in this comment and it is ALL my favorite bit!
Like the Tide, 3/?templemarkerAugust 10 2011, 05:44:48 UTC
riventhorn, I hope it's okay that I'm still putting this here, even though it's been several weeks. /o\ work ate me. let me know if not, and I'll repost to my journal
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Re: Like the Tide, 3/?riventhornAugust 10 2011, 06:43:21 UTC
Of course it's okay! :) And feel free to post it elsewhere as well when you're finished, as I'm not sure how many people are still tracking this fest.
I'm so glad you're continuing as I'm just loving it--such lovely descriptions and the bit in the next part, where Marcus wonders if he is more or less of a man for loving Esca is just phrased so beautifully.
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Your writing is vivid and evocative and the imagery is lovely, and you captured their characters really really well.
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I hope you will write more!
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I'm so glad you're continuing as I'm just loving it--such lovely descriptions and the bit in the next part, where Marcus wonders if he is more or less of a man for loving Esca is just phrased so beautifully.
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