Murata vs Shinou ~Marude anata no hitomi no iro~

Jul 06, 2006 18:07

... I tried to concentrate on my reports but I failed ... ;__;
So, I ended with write the full story of the previous posts.
I'm sorry if my English become bad than usual because I'm in half sleeping now ... ^^;;

About this Short stories
I bought `The Beans vol.6 magazine` (which put the story of Daikenja meeting Shinou) some month ago, and there was a service for fans to got Short Story + short manga of : Saiunkoku monogatari, Shounen Ommyouji, Maruma series.

Saiunkoku SS one told about Shouka and Reishin's younger brother, Kou Kurou sight ^^
The manga one told about ... Kouyu, Shuuei, Ryuki wear woman clothes LOL and we will see Kou Kijin face, which never can be seen in novel (although only his eyes )XDDDD

Shounen Ommyouji told about continue of the story in The Beans vol6, about one of 12 gods; GENBU, meet a girl who can touch him...
Manga one has 2 stories, one about how 12 gods take care the Seimei's children XD and another one is cute story of Akiko goes shopping ^^

And the last is maruma, which could be my best favourite, even it didn't has comic as bonus ...
Well, like what Takabayashi sensei said, this story is `bonus`, so even we didn't read this, we still can understand the story of the main novel.
I admit that, but I also think this SS is really important for fans to understanding about SHINOU, DAIKENJA, and MURATA. Please remember that novel stories different with anime, so don't make Anime story as basic of thinking XD

Read here and Here maybe will make you more understanding about Shinou ?
_miyuchan_, Evercool, we have job to do XD ^_^ (remember that she didn't posted 2nd Shinken novel at comm ... ;;;;;)



Marude anata no hitomi no iro
~Like your eyes color~

*First of all, here is some facts of Shinou - Daikenja family*

1. The story begin with a near 10 years old children --Shinou-- saw a black color cross over his sight.

2. Shinou called as `Bouya` (child) by his mother, who was a dancer.

3. Shinou's mother tell about the person who was just seen by Shinou. She was new woman of the king. Mother told about what she heard from maid about that Soukoku (black hair and eyes) woman.

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*That soukoku race woman is in the middle of journey from far east place.

*Soukoku race told that has high intelligent, but that's not all. That race told that know about the logic of this world, know about how the heaven and earth was made.
And Shinou's mother also wonder if they know about another country's curse, because the curse and the dancing is connected, and she is a dancer.
.... Soukoku race... what is this race truly?? Know about the making of the world? ... I think this race will took important part of the story and the secret of Soushu...

*That soukoku woman is the last young woman in her village. Shinou's mother wondered that who will born the heir of the village.

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4. Shinou's mother is a road dancer. She was given free to not live inside the castle by the king, but she need to dancing in front of the king.

5. Shinou has some older brother. The 1st prince is 15 years old older than Shinou. And Shinou has quite close relationship with this brother. This brother also said the same thing with Shinou's mother about Soukoku race. Shinou asked if that woman will help the king on politics if she has that kind of intelligent.
But his brother said that thinking can't be accepted, because the king didn't want a woman has power. Shinou asked his brother to include woman in the politics when the bro become king. But that brother said that if something happen to him, Shinou better to become next king, Shinou will make a good country...

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*Some year later, that brother has died. He was pushed to killed himself after trapped by his relatives, told that do the rebel.
But the truth is, that brother's neck is not his, but the neck of a man whom dead in the bar 2 night ago. The brother helped by a dancer (I susposed she is Shinou's mother) and run from the country. But Shinou told that he didn't know the truth, because he didn't see by himself, and when his mother back to the kingdom from her long trip, Shinou already leaved the country.

*Shinou told that it's pity to see the brother was not become a king, because if he was became a king, that country mustn't fall so quickly. At least until Shinou attcked that country.
Shinou loves war, he didn't care even if he fight against his `family`.

*Murata try to convince Shinou.
He try to make that king understand that he is not Daikenja.
Shinou give a part of his memory to Murata, because `Murata` said that he wanted to know his past before.
Murata refuse it. He told that the person who want to know that is Shinou's important Daikenja, not himself.
But Shinou is quite insistent.
Murata think that if this person still see him as the same person with Daikenja, he will ask Shinou:

............ Grandpa, you just finish eat the breakfast a minute ago, right?

Shinou already lived very long, so it's make sense if this person become forgot about things.
For Murata, Shinou's sight is just annoying him.
He is not Shinmakoku's people, and also not a follower whom oath the loyalty to Shinou.
He has reasons to grudge against Shinou, but didn't has any reason to repect him.

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THE STORY CHANGED TO FLASH BACK
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*spoiler from Hako ma*
Murata tried to use fragment of fire box and the explosion of the car to go to `that world`, to met Yuuri.
He tried the same thing with Hasel Grabes.
He believed that the fragment will go back to it box, which put at Holy sand Country.
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But when he almost give up, thinking that using this exploding way is a mistake because he was near burn now, a cold things catch his right wrist.
But that cold things pulled him too strong. Murata feel like pull through cuff, he feel really pain on his wrist.

He was pull to a cold place.
Murata pull his part of body on the cold floor, try to cold his hot body.
After Murata can breath well, he noticed that a man watch on him.
Murata was lazy to wake up, so he just flitting his hand.

"Hi, how do you do?"
" You cut your hair, weren't you? And it also burn."

Murata found that the one who watch him is the man who called Shinou.
He know it, because it's same face with the person in one of his past memory.
He also think that his face is like Wolfram, but the atmosphere was totally different.
The light of his eyes is also different.

Murata think that even maybe he is like the god between Mazokus, for him, Shinou is the person who he was should be hate.
Because Shinou has cursed his soul with unreasonable reason, make lots people (in this case, Murata told about his past persons whom die with lots suffering) got pain...

That Shinou now sit in front of him, with naked appearance.
But his crotch become mozaik, because Murata's glasses cracked.

Murata asked him to wear clothes, but Shinou asked back why he should wear it while his body is not at here.
Murata think that finally Shinou dying, because didn't has body = die, but Shinou said that he just leave his body for a while.
Shinou's body was needed to separated the Shinoubyou and `this space.`So his body is like the connection of space to space.

Murata notice that there are 2 doors in this room. He asked where was he come, and Shinou pointed the fireplace.
It reminds me harry potter ^^;; when they trip with Floo XD

Murata saw a very big fire at the fireplace, but for Shinou, that place just a dark hole.
It happened because that space is the place which can be changed by imagination.
That cold dark green room, and Shinou himself is also Murata's image.
That room is the bedroom of Shinou... (and looks like it's not surprising that Shinou naked ^^;;)

Shinou explained about this space.
*This space didn't has cold and hot things, and the march of time is different with outside.
*That space is the one step before place which the dead person go.

Shinou called Murata like he spoke to Daikenja.
Shinou pull Murata to his `new home` because he want to met and talked with him about lots things.
Murata told that he is not daikenja, and it will be trouble if Shinou mix it.
He asked Shinou to told him way to go home, and Shinou answer calmly that he can back through the same way of he come.

Their talking continue with Yuuri as topic.
Shinou didn't know about Yuuri's family name.
He said that he almost didn't know how is Yuuri on earth.
Shinou asked Murata to give him memory of Yuuri's personality.
It requested by Shinou because he just want to know, because he can imagine how that young Maou will grow up to what kind of Maou.
Shinou said that he will give what `Murata` want to.

Then he put 4 small cards on table.
2 cards was put in front of him, and another one is in front of a chair.
Shinou told Murata to sit down and put his memory about Yuuri on 1 card.
He told that he will give `Murata`s past as an exchange.

Finally Murata sit down on that chair with pushed of Shinou and got Daikenja's past.
But although he get that memory, he didn't feel any deep emotion. Murata felt relief, because it's mean he is not eaten by other personalitys.
If he assimilate with Daikenja, he will cry happily because finally he got what he want to for long long time.

Now Murata's turn, and he give his memory about Shibuya Yuuri to Shinou.
It's a happening before Murata told that he is daikenja.
They are played about searching `past person`.
They just need to fill the name, birthday, place of born, and the time of born.
Yuuri got the result that he was the reincarnation of HIMIKO (A famous queen of Yamato country) but same result already appeared 3 times today.

From here, they begin told about the incarnation thing.
Murata asked Yuuri about why they choose this way of life.
He also said that he was worried if their action only a program, which made by something like god, if it programmed on human's `soul`.
Yuuri said he didn't know about god thing, give opinion about DNA thing. Looks like Shouri has told about DNA to Yuuri, about why human different with each other...

After finish seeing the memory, Shinou's opinion about him is:

"What a boring child."

Murata said that Shinou has different opinion with Mazokus, whom totally praise Yuuri. But Murata know that it's one of Shinou's strategy.
Shinou used the hidden soul and give order to grow him at another world. The Maou who was hid until grow up make people hope highly to the Maou, when the samewhile it made mysterious thing of Maou become up.
The simple sample of it is Gunter XD.

But even Shinou choose the perfect appearance and hidden soul, he only hope for trivial ability from Yuuri.
Murata was thinking before, if Shinou want to make Yuuri as a good king, then why he didn't give Yuuri more ability?
But that thinking disappear after see Yuuri's work.

Shinou told that Yuuri didn't look so clever at that world. He pointed about how Yuuri thinking about how is it if his past was a murder. Yuuri think that he didn't want to remember his past back because of it, but Shinou think that if he remembered himself as murder, it's not problem because he can become a good soldier who didn't hesitate to kill enemy.

Murata told Shinou that he and Yuuri has a principle, that they won't got confused with past personality.
Shinou asked back that if that young Maou can stand his personality while he is in anykind of situation.
Shinou's word make Murata noticed that Yuuri is in danger.

Murata got angry with the fact that Shinou didn't want to help Yuuri from begin.

"It's wrong to envy Shibuya, just because you didn't loved by everyone."
"Envy?"
"Isn't it? You choose him by yourself but now you are become impatient. You didn't think that he will do very well like that."
"I admit that is out of my expectation. I never thought that he will catch people's heart and consolidate his position as Maou so quickly. But it's good miscalculation, I'm happy to see him become good king too. Why I have to envy that boy?"
"Then why won't you help him? If you are not envy, then do you hoping for his fail?"
"I won't help anyone."

Shinou told that he never helped the Maous before, neither Celi and past Maous.
If Murata really wants it, he will intervene for this time only. But he ordered to collected the boxes as exchange...

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ABOUT THE BROKEN RELATIONSHIP OF SHINOU-DAIKENJA
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Different with anime, Daikenja and Shinou debated about the box and finally got separated (in anime, Daikenja stay near Shinou until he dead and Murata = Daikenja thinking is too strong, but that's okay for anime XD).
Daikenja left the castle without saying anything to Shinou and went to earth with bring 2 boxes...
And Shinou become a good king, become a `father` of the Mazoku.
But both of them always thought about each other, although it's already late to fixed their relationship ...

1. The reason why Shinou want collected the boxes.

-> Shinou never satisfy if he is not become the strongest and greatest one. He can't forgive someone else got big power. He never thinking to give up the Soushu's power, even if he won't use it.

-> Shinou didn't want human opened the box, because if it was happen, the war was not become interesting again.
... God, Shinou 0_0. You truly love war ! But I love this cold bloody king ... XD He got what everything he want, but what he truly want lost because of the box. Maybe if there is someone/something Shinou hate, it should be the box, which separated him with his beloved brother ...

-> Shinou wants the 4 boxes and the keys under him, because it's would be easy to fight. He didn't need to order to make a war everytime he heard human begin searching the box, make a war to revolt the human's eyes from the area which the box is in. He also said that he didn't need to bothering at the last war.
WTF !? The last war means 20 years ago war??? So it's not a war between Mazoku and human, but it order of Shinou to protected the box from human sight!? .... Wait a minute, then how is Julia's dying ? Is that ... one of Shinou's strategy too ?? ....... I wonder what Shinou said to her until she decided to leave her soul as next Maou ... . Btw, Julia said to give her soul to Conrad before dying. So she is know that Conrad still alive? Is she heard from Shinou too?
... May I punch you, Shinou ?

2. The reason behind Shinou-Daikenja separated 4000 years ago

--> Shinou blamed Daikenja for below things.
* Daikenja bring the 4 boxes separately
* He didn't put the 4 keys in Shinou's body like what Shinou want, but put this on 4 followers.
* He left Shinou without said anything (Daikenja brought water and fire boxes to earth).

--> Daikenja thinking:
* It's too dangerous to put the boxes and the keys at the same place.
* When Shinou asked that if he didn't believe him to not use the box, Murata said that daikenja believed in Shinou, but daikenja worried that if this country fall, then the box and the key will fall to someone's hand, who anyone know.

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MURATA VS SHINOU ~ DAIKENJA'S FEELING ~
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*Murata said that he won't help Shinou to completed the box. Although maybe at the end of his way there is the box, the person who should decided to do something to the box is not Shinou, but Shibuya.

*Shinou complained that `His wish is Maou's wish`. Both of them has same thinking to not opened the box. But Murata disagree with it.

"No, it's not same. You and Shibuya doesn't has anykind of same thing. I will do everything to him, but I don't have any duty to work for you.
Listen, the great ancestor. I'm not your right hand or your younger brother. I don't have any reason to take side with you."

"Then, will you turn to my enemy?"
".... If it needed."

If he can, Murata want to tell that he didn't want to fight agaisnt Shinou. Even if he and his past persons got pain because of this man's word, he understand that this person has lots things to be respect.
But Murata only has one answer .

"If you will become Yuuri's enemy, then I have no choice than become your enemy too."

Shinou didn't change his face. But his voice become hoarse like suddenly become old, talked in thin voice, and fill his words with despair.

"But, I need you beside of me."
"It was good if you told it to him at that time."

It would be good if I still has Kenja's feeling inside of me. It's my first time thought about that. If I still has that feeling even just a dust, I will hear it with full of happiness.

"If you said that to him even it just a lie, you were not need to hurt each other and got separated."
" Is it impossible to said it now?"
"It's already late, Shinou-Heika. The person who look for that word is not me, and the person whom you always look for is not me or Le Jean, but Soukoku no Daikenja. But ..... he already gone long time ago."
"Go !"

Murata seeing Shinou sit down and put his finger on his forehead, looks so tired.
Murata thinking that the finger is also his image.
Because his true finger is full of wound and his palm always colored by blood...

"You can go now, Go . Go to your new king place.
I'm sure you and my little brother hated me. You must be thinking that it's better to throw yourself to that fire than stay with me."

Murata didn't answer that.
He was prepare to throw himself to the fire, to go to Yuuri's place.
But before he throw, he told Shinou to see the another card.
The card, which he put with his memory.
He feel that Shinou opened the card at his back... but he can't wait until the end.
He step to go in to the fire.
Step to go to the place which he should be gone.

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Daikenja was wake up.
He found two boxes, and felt glad to see that boxes was not lost.

Daikenja found himself at pairie.
The sky color is same with his country.
The warm wind was blow.

Daikenja felt that this place is the beautiful world.
But he thought that he needed device to live in this kind of hot place.
He thought to cut his long hair.
He found the white sand and the blue sea at far of paeria.

Seeing that no border between sea and the sky make him smiling.

He was smiling, and mumbled although no one will answered him.

Look, look at that sea.
It's like your eyes color.

~ END ~

I hope Shinou can feel happy, know that Daikenja didn't hate him like what he thinking for long time.
Shinou regret about how he and Daikenja relationsip ended with hurt each other.
He tried to fix the relationship by give what Daikeja want 4000 years ago.
But ... Murata is not Daikenja.
He already lost his feeling as Daikenja, although he still has his memory.
It's so hurt seeing Shinou will never get his beloved brother forever ...

I truly hope He won't become Yuuri's enemy and fight against Murata.

.... 4000 years.
What Shinou truly hope won't come back to his side.

I wonder what is Shinou decision after this...
If he never helped Yuuri, then what is Yuuri's personality, then.
Maou personality, Julia, and another personality.
Could that all personalities is Yuuri's past personality?
Shinou ordered Murata to completed the box.
How is Conrad, then?
I can't find reason why Conrad stay at Shimaron if it true that Shinou didn't give any order to him.
... This story become confused and confused everytime I read it ^^;;;;;;;;;

Hope you all enjoy it ~

novel, maruma

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