You'll Be My Prince (Prologue)

[rissa_ichigo]

Title: You'll Be My Prince
Author: Rissa
Pairing/s: Russia/Fem!America, Russia/America, and others. (It's a secret right now XD)
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Amelia Kirkland is heir to the Kirkland fortune and next in line for Brittania's throne. Her father, fearing for her safety and well being, casted a spell on her at the mere age of six so no one could

Comments

[apannah]

Now THIS looks like a really good story idea.

I really like your writing style too, it gives a good sense of feeling.

The only possible complaint i could have is that you pace it a little fast, making it seem slightly rushed.

But besdes that, Great job!

[rissa_ichigo]

Thanks so much! Yea....just read this a 3rd time and realized it is a bit rushed. But not to worry! It shall have a slow pace from now on. I'm just not very good at starting stories or essays orz...

[apannah]

if you want I could help beta it Is eager to help out and get early updates

[rissa_ichigo]

I have never had a beta help before. Would I be sending the chapter to you through e-mail?

Is uber happy someone offered. I know I have major issues with using tenses. XD

Moarr plz...

[indonesia_chan]

I love it! ;)

Re: Moarr plz...

[rissa_ichigo]

Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it so far! Next chappy won't be so rushed!

[charliechick117]

:D

I'm intrigued. Especially about the whole 'turning-into-a-boy-at-night' thing.

More, please?

[rissa_ichigo]

Will do as soon as I finish YHIAH! :3

[sakerat]

No no don't be nervous, this so like a great fic.

I want that dress.