Birthday fic for Mei!

Aug 31, 2008 18:31

Author: Risabet
Title: A day in our life
Pairing: G-TOP
Word count: 2193
Rating: PG-13 for kissing and cursing
Disclaimer: I am in no way related to these people, only the story is mine.
Summary: Practice, runny noses, riding in cars from one place to another and kisses that started out as a joke. Shake and stir. Results in yet another day in the lives ( Read more... )

fandoms, fiction, big bang

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meiface August 31 2008, 17:03:28 UTC
Aww, Risa, thank you so much. This is so cute and day-in-the-life-of. Big Bang makes me happy. ♥ I think my favorite part was actually Daesung's hunt for his shirt though. :D That seems like such an everyday guy thing to do but awwww friendship and bandlove all around. This is so heartwarming. Seriously, ♥♥.

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risabet September 2 2008, 04:30:04 UTC
Awww, ty ♥ I'm so glad you liked this ♥ I'm also kind of fond of the t-shirt hunt, it was actually the first part I wrote :D

♥♥♥

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gooddaymoderato August 31 2008, 20:49:26 UTC
Aww. I really liked your fic. You did really capturing the member's characters. Just one thing, Jiyong is absolutely a neat freak. He hates disorganization more than anything and he treasures his clothes a lot so they're always neatly put away. Seunghyun, however, is a pig lol

"but it is surprisingly difficult to form coherent sentences when your so-called, shirt-snagging friend is trying to trip you and then perform unspeakable horrors to you." <-- I loved this line. So freaken cute Daesung.

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gooddaymoderato August 31 2008, 20:50:48 UTC
Oops I left out "well" - as in you did really well capturing the member's characters. ^^

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risabet September 2 2008, 04:33:10 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm glad you liked it ^^ And thank you so much for pointing that out *facepalm* Now that I think of it, it definitely makes sense for Jiyoung to be a neat freak, given what a perfectionist he seems to be. And somehow I'm not that surprised to hear that about Seunghyun :DD But these are important facts, and I'll definitely keep them in mind the next time I write Big Bang! Thank you ♥

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sasakorujjin September 1 2008, 07:37:36 UTC
ahha, omg, this was so cute! everyone's potrayel was right on and this story just put a smile on my face! please write more!

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risabet September 2 2008, 04:33:45 UTC
Oh, thank you so much~ I'm really glad you liked it ^^

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dio_elaclaire September 3 2008, 17:59:51 UTC
Very nice! Especially for a first BB story. I liked the connection between the beginning and the ending. All of the mini episodes were nice, but the part about Dae's 'lucky' shirt was my favorite and the funniest one, too. Really well done :)

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risabet September 4 2008, 11:42:28 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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jukecookie September 11 2008, 11:50:44 UTC
Awwww.... I really really liked this and dae sung's hunt for his shirt was lol....
I'll most definitely be waiting for other stories from u.. =)
Awesome job!! =)

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risabet September 11 2008, 18:06:16 UTC
Thank you so much! *^^*

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