Comments | risabet: SuJu 100 fics: 043. Washing Machines, Donghae/Shiwon

risabet

SuJu 100 fics: 043. Washing Machines, Donghae/Shiwon

Feb 25, 2008 23:56

Author: Risabet
Title: 043. Washing machines, Donghae/Shiwon
Rating: PG-13, and contains themes that some might find upsetting (sorry, I don't want to give the plot away)
Disclaimer: I am in no way related to these people, only the story is mine. The lyrics used are written by and belong to Sufjan Stevens.
Fic count: 12/100

( Washing Machines )

fiction, challenge, super junior

Comments 13

cynicalxcharm February 25 2008, 23:33:35 UTC

That was goood ^_^

I've never actually seen this pairing before, but I don't hate it. Poor Donghae T-T

risabet February 27 2008, 08:06:40 UTC

Ah, thank you!

meiface February 25 2008, 23:51:58 UTC

I just want to let you know this fic made me cry and it's kind of embarrassing because I'm in the Student Union on campus. I'll come back and finish my comment when I'm done crying and in a less public place. ♥

risabet February 27 2008, 08:07:05 UTC

Yah, sorry for making you cry! ;__; *offers tissues*

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risabet February 27 2008, 08:08:45 UTC

Afafjkl Kendra ♥♥♥ ILU too, please don't cry *comfort cookies*

That icon is ♥

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risabet February 27 2008, 08:09:28 UTC

Augh, I've made so many people cry, sorry ;__; *huggles* Thank you for your amazing comment~

dear_whimsy February 26 2008, 01:48:35 UTC

HI WHY DID I NOT SEE THIS POSTED.

dear_whimsy February 26 2008, 02:17:24 UTC

So. Gorgeous as always? Gorgeous as always. 8DD The way you put the scenes out of order was a brilliant touch - I thought it lent an air of disorder and mild confusion/chaos/loss to the whole piece <3 *inhales deeply in preparation for the flailing comment to come*

The first section was somehow profound. I don't want to be like, pretentious or anything, but I thought what you dealt with - and Shiwon can't sleep because he knows without knowing it - how sometimes when you find out something has happened, you realize you already knew. That was universal.

and Shiwon feels unsure, thinking but it was, wasn't it?

God, Risa. Just - augh. There's so much truth in this, it's - augh.

wearing only the light that falls upon him.

This is a line you never forget. It's such a vivid image in my mind; burned there.

, only whites, only pure whites with no blues among them.

That hurt. Why did it hurt?

Moments have passed, are passing as they stand there and bleed, but only one person in the room has arrived at a destination on time.I don't ( ... )

risabet February 27 2008, 08:13:55 UTC

Victoria, I seriously love you and your epic comments that make me blush. You're too good to me ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

Like when all there is is bad news and regretful calls.
Exactly. You always get what I mean, even when you say you aren't sure whether you do or don't.

Please don't be sad ;__; *hugs* But I'm so glad you still enjoyed this, even if it made you feel that way (you know what I mean). Also, please tell your friend I'm sorry for making her cry!

dear_whimsy February 27 2008, 21:57:50 UTC

You more than deserve it <3

I want to be safe, I guess. ^^ I mean, I am no kind of profound person IRL - when I say something "deep" it sounds awkward and pretentious. The only way I'm really comfortable with it is in fiction. I'm so glad I come across properly through the Internet. XDDD

SAD IS GOOD!! T___T XD I like being sad, it's cleansing. AND I WON'T TELL HER, JUST BECAUSE SHE WAS THE ONE PUTTING MUSTACHES ON THE SUJU MEMBERS. D< XDD

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