Comments | ripptyd: fic: the inescapable us (gl, rps - crystal chappell/jessica leccia)

ripptyd

fic: the inescapable us (gl, rps - crystal chappell/jessica leccia)

Jul 27, 2009 02:15

Title: The Inescapable Us
Author: ripptyd
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: GL - CC & JL (RPF)
Word Count: 566
Summary: She’s kissing you so hard and fast that you think you’ll just die if she keeps going. But you know you’ll die if she stops.
Author's Note: If you don't like RPF/S, then don't read it. Seriously. Based on THIS song.

( The first time you see her, she’s walking down the hallway of the studio... )

people: crystal chappell, people: jessica leccia, tv: gl, fic: rps

Comments 25

unicorn23 July 27 2009, 17:32:28 UTC

I can't make up my mind which one is my favorite story of yours but right now, this tops the list. I LOVED how you incorporated the song into the story and I'm so glad you figured out how to include "the sparkling spot" without it coming off as forced. Also, I'm glad you changed "beyond" to "from" in the first paragraph. I think it flows a lot better.

All that talk of worshiping Crystal makes me giddy like a schoolgirl. You certainly know how to make a Crystal fan happy, just saying. And I'm a big fan of the flashbacks and the flashes to the present. That was pure genius.

She's taking the air from your lungs, leaving you breathless as she walks away.

GUH.

ripptyd September 2 2009, 23:40:56 UTC

<3

I felt like a fucking genius when I figured out the sparkling spot, lol.

10zlaine July 27 2009, 22:16:10 UTC

fucking hell.

i, too, love how you played with past and present.

just. pain. gah.

ripptyd September 2 2009, 23:43:19 UTC

THANK YOU BB. See how I'm still replying? LOL.

tania37 July 30 2009, 10:24:18 UTC

*Sigh* My goodness you rock!

ripptyd September 2 2009, 23:46:05 UTC

Thank you!

shawty_swingz July 31 2009, 01:30:43 UTC

I fucking LOVE your RPFS, especially when it concerns JL. Just curious... have you seen the comment about the Peapack Camera Guy? Something along the lines of someone wanting a pic of JL, offering their kidney and he replied with,

"keep that kidney!! I will try. But it might have Crystal too. They are... close."

Oh the INFERENCE in the whole '...close' comment. I think I'm wishing way too hard...

Anyway, PLEASE continue. You'r fucking FAB.

ripptyd September 2 2009, 23:50:51 UTC

NO I didn't see that. But now it's in my damn brain. THANK YOU, lol.

dariclone August 25 2009, 23:42:06 UTC

Oh my God, poor Jessica. I love this though, I think this would be how something like this would happen between them.

ripptyd September 2 2009, 23:52:12 UTC

Thank you!