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[riotglassdoll]

Title: The Puppet Master / Chapter 01 - The train ride
Author: Freijo / riotglassdoll
Rating: R
Story summary: '"Very amusing. And what about you, seen a hair brush lately? Do us a favour and just shave it of, I could even make it a pleasure of doing it myself." He smirked and was about to walk away when the train made a sudden strong movement and

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[banquier]

The storyline is really good. I can feel JKR's characters coming out in this one, unlike other stories where Draco is all lovey-dovey. I agree with the person above as far as spelling and grammatical errors. I'm always happy to help if you need it :]

[electrelanelove]

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