Don't Blink Just Yet (2/3)

[rinmi]

Title: Don’t blink just yet
Genre: romance, fluff, drama
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: unbetad. This is a work of fiction. Influences from Sunday at Tiffany’s.
Summary: Junsu had never let go of his imaginary friend.

Comments

[sabsabwidget]

Gah~ I love how this story is playing out. For some reason, the idea of Kiss the Baby Sky being such an integral part of the story really appeals to me. Maybe it's the overall tone and feeling the song itself gives off that reflects in Junsu and Yoochun's childhood together. I don't know. Maybe it's the title of the song itself (I absolutely love the title of the song) but whatever it is, I love that you're using it in the story. It doesn't seem like it would be the first choice for many people as a song to use, which makes me love it and its role in the story even more. It makes it seem almost more meaningful to the piece and the developing relationship between Junsu and Yoochun because the song isn't overdone (from what I've seen). Anyhow, I can't wait for the next part. :D

[rinmi]

you're comment just made me smile like crazy :))))
i love kiss the baby sky as well the name and the song is really pretty. the melody is cute n bright but there is also a sadness that undermines the song, as does most of yoochun's work.

tbqh i did hesitate to use the song as it seemed cliche or cheesy haha but im glad you like it ^^

[sabsabwidget]

YES. That is EXACTLY what it is. The underlying sadness. I couldn't quite put my words on what exactly it was, but it's definitely an underlying sadness. It's a bit nostalgic, too. It's always sort of given me an impression of something that's happened in the past, like a childhood memory. Which definitely helps my appreciation of its involvement in Junsu and Yoochun's childhoods.

[rinmi]

yeah KTBS is definitely nostalgic as well. it has an innocent ring to it. have u heard the piano version by keudae? she did a great job. :)

[taembomb]

I'm so incoherent right now that I really can't say anything else but this, 'THIS IS BEAUTIFUL'
It's so perfect and lovely and so gorgeous
they finally found each other (though not really 'each other' since theyre not aware of what exactly happened in the past)
they're going to relive their childhood together? HOW SWEEEET xDDD
update soon!

[rinmi]

awwwww! you sound perfectly coherent to me~ keke thank you for the beautiful comment :) reliving a childhood together is the best way to start now that they found each other <3

[iscreamout]

awwwwww oh my~~ this is so romantic.. idk what to say
but it's so heart warming chapter..
I hope chun remember soon :')

[rinmi]

romancing yoosu is love~ i hope chun remembers too

thanks for reading and commenting!

[hejcarrow]

omg, it all make sense now !!!
i love this... i really do
i feel all happy, but sad at the same time haha
beautiful ♥ & your type of writing is amazing, don't wanna stop reading at all

[rinmi]

Glad it makes sense to u haha
Thanks for reading and commenting

[5_dreamchaser]

I loved how you used Kiss the Baby Sky to portray their childhood memories :)
I love that song which always gives me a sense of peacefulness on a bright sunny day ^^
n you made me missed my childhood dearly...
I wished that I could go back to being a child again :)
thanks for the update!^^

[rinmi]

Hmm Kiss the baby sky is a very pretty song :)
I think everyone secretly misses being a child again
Life is so much simpler being young n innocent
Thanks for reading and commenting!