Knockin’ on Heaven’s Door

Apr 27, 2012 17:43

Title: Knockin’ on Heaven’s Door
Pairing: Yoosu, Chunjae, implied Jaesu
Rating: R
Genre: Angst
Length: one-shot
Disclaimer: Nothing is mine except the fictional plot.
Warning: Character(s) death. Substance abuse. Be warned

Knock,knock,knockin' on heaven's door )

genre: angst, rating: r, pairing: yoosu, paring: chunjae, genre: romance, fanfic: one-shot

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rinmi April 28 2012, 02:10:39 UTC
Spot for the birthday girl <3

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cosmicanomaly April 28 2012, 03:52:39 UTC
Homg what have you done to me? ;A;
Stab me in the chest and leave me to die okthxbai.
But seriously, your way with imagery is no joke; can you please teach me? 8D

AND IF YOU END UP CREEPING HER COMMENTS: HAPPY BIRTHDAY BAYBEEEE<34567

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rinmi April 28 2012, 04:15:06 UTC
i would never leave u to die! i will stab u n then lick your wounds okk XDD

my way with imagery...crying lolol i dunno what else to say besides picturing everything in ur head and then work ur way to it. i had to do alot of revising and editing :'))

<333

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cosmicanomaly April 28 2012, 06:01:35 UTC
LMFAO stab you and lick your wounds homg I love you <3
Vampire Linh omgsh 8D

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rinmi April 28 2012, 20:14:29 UTC
vampire linh will make u bloody mary XXD

/get shot

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missyoosu April 28 2012, 03:55:56 UTC
Your writing seems so advance for me. Really good descriptive writing. I envy you.

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rinmi April 28 2012, 04:18:08 UTC
hahah i feel embarrassed... u make me shy >///< i think my writing have improved since im taking ap lang/comp this year. we did so much reading n writing. OTL

<333

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joy_twinz April 28 2012, 08:24:14 UTC
omg what did I just read? the grief yoosu felt when jae died was just too overwhelming. I can't. T_T

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rinmi April 29 2012, 13:51:01 UTC
Yes they both had different ways in dealing with their pain. They both had to struggle between public n private grieving but junsu's stages of grief lived off of yoochun D:

Keke thanks for reading <333

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nuraluv April 28 2012, 19:51:14 UTC
ohh WOW..this is so beautiful and SAD of course.da hint soulmate was there but i thought maybe it's still yoosu nwy,oh n bam jae is ere too?oh right silly "soulmate" of course.but ohgod this is so00 good that i was so00 damn into it,it freaked me out,i mean jae,OUR JAE?gone??even the thought of it is overwhelming,glad this is fic,a freaking nicely written one.tq 4 sharing this dear^ ^

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nuraluv April 28 2012, 19:53:02 UTC
oh yes.i didn't see the pairing..chunjae etc.lol

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rinmi April 29 2012, 13:55:46 UTC
Hahahah bb ur comment is so cuteee XD
Yes its a jyj love triangle almost. Soulmate's relationship prior
To jae's death is ambiguous so we don't know if it
Was Yoosu or Chunjae first and jaesu was implied
Which works either way as well becuz soulmates share everything
And Yoosu is " one" lol do I make any sense? DX

Thanks for reading n this lovely comment <3333

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nuraluv April 29 2012, 18:00:13 UTC
hahha..yes i understand,yoosu is the symbolic of eternal love.forever my otp.lol *facepalm..this is da first time someone says that my comment is cute.lol.still i always admire your writing,always so full with descriptions n all *sigh sory for my bad english XD

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