I've been reading it through-out the day, and to be honest; some fics of yours I can't read because they are nearer to an original story and your world building is great but sometimes confuses me (nothing wrong with your writing; it's all me:D), but I had no problem whatsoever reading this.
Great great great stuff.
I love how you managed to shift canon ever so slightly and Yep, brilliance.
Funny you should mention my world building, I was told by an editor at Dragon*Con that if I am primarily doing AU stories as fanfic, that I have probably graduated and should go back to original fic.
Thing with original fic is, I can't really get into the story because I have no imagination whatsoever. Like with your Telpa verse, despite you using characters from Stargate, I can't recognize anything. It's hard for me to read.
As you saw, I couldn't completely cut Daniel out. I had to leave him in there due to his past association with SG-1 and the Abydos Mission from Hell. He'll be back later with the refugees.
The artwork is beautiful and this story was fucking amazing! Omg I need MOAR Uhg, I want to know what happens next! Please tell me you're working on a sequel? Arg, so much love for this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I'll be reading *nods*
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THAT STORY WAS AMAZING!
Yes, it needed caps.
I've been reading it through-out the day, and to be honest; some fics of yours I can't read because they are nearer to an original story and your world building is great but sometimes confuses me (nothing wrong with your writing; it's all me:D), but I had no problem whatsoever reading this.
Great great great stuff.
I love how you managed to shift canon ever so slightly and Yep, brilliance.
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Funny you should mention my world building, I was told by an editor at Dragon*Con that if I am primarily doing AU stories as fanfic, that I have probably graduated and should go back to original fic.
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I like the changes I've noticed so far, BTW.
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Glad you like the changes.
As you saw, I couldn't completely cut Daniel out. I had to leave him in there due to his past association with SG-1 and the Abydos Mission from Hell. He'll be back later with the refugees.
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