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Girl Talk

Aug 30, 2011 23:57

Title: Girl Talk
Fandom: SGA
Characters/Pairing: Cadman/Sheppard, Porter/O’Neill
Orientation: Het
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 938

Prompt: Kinkbingo Fill: “Ageplay”

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fandom: stargate atlantis, orientation: het, z_2011 kb stargate 1, pairing: jon/porter, size: 500 to 999, pairing: sheppard/cadman, rating: pg-13, kb: ageplay

Comments 6

camshaft22 August 31 2011, 04:02:08 UTC

I love this!!!

Well done!

I love that Allie is her bff!

rinkafic August 31 2011, 13:55:31 UTC

Well, since Allie wasn't her partner, I figured I'd make her the next best thing, a BFF with bennies.

Look at me, I'm being a rebel - I'm using a non-regulation Icon!!!

theeverdream August 31 2011, 04:07:48 UTC

I really like how this seems like a natural one-sided conversation - no extra awkward explanations added for the sole purpose of making sure we understand, yet it's completely understandable anyawy.

rinkafic August 31 2011, 13:56:39 UTC

Thanks! I wasn't sure how that was going to work, I tried making the entire thing a one sided conversation, completely dialogue, but it was messy and run-on.

*Hugs the Holla*

brneyestx September 2 2011, 21:04:06 UTC

love it! :D

rinkafic September 5 2011, 23:03:10 UTC

Thanks! Tried not to make John too sleazy, even though he's playing out a sleazy fantasy.