oneshot | disaster button

[bokunostation]

title: disaster button
rating: pg-13 for murder scenes and language
genre: psychological thriller
character/pairing(s): fukuda mayuko-centric and bits of obvious fukuda/kamiki
summary: when you saw a red button you weren't supposed to engage, you disobeyed and look where it got you.
notes: for yukitan ...wtf is grammar idk grammar pfft... also, this could

Comments

[yukitan]

You really out did yourself again, Master~! :3

Reading this confirmed you're the best writer at this psychological thriller genre. Seriously have to reread it several times and digested it slowly. Each time I read it, it's so different from the first. The story, scenery, imagery, everything are so layered that it's hard to look over it once. That's something really difficult to do, but it's the best type of story to read. I wondered if you planned it or just your inborn talents. (I say talent! fufu)

I love that this started and ended with "zero".

Its head the size of a solid bubble when she wrapped her hand around it, baby-soft feather drenched in sticky mud of sinful scarlet, black beak painted red and crunchy wings stained in crimson cherry, fractured and crushed to chunks of a vulture's snack.
I was like wtf did I just read? 10 years old Mayuko crushing a poor bird's skull. Have to reread this just to make sure. She was just singing a lullaby to it... and then this.

She smiled at her nutcracker hand, the force it had exerted

[yukitan]

Continued because lj said I talked too much. ;_;

It was the kind of nickname girls in school tend to use for each other, even boys and they would wrapped their arms together, clinging towards each other like a bunch of idiotic koala groupie.
Stabstabstabstab…more,more…deeper…
“Alright, who’s next?”
Reading these parts was hilarious.

like he was born just to be with her.
Let me just take a few hours and admire this perfection. TT___TT Ryuko~ ♥ I haven't seen you two in so long. ;_;

and the road gets too tough to walk onI just realized the meaning behind this. :o

[bokunostation]

brutal ryuko is my forte .....jk.

what do you mean you just realized the meaning? :o ..like, how do you interpret this?

i seriously didn't know which one should do the dirty job, takeru or miura but yeah.. pfft

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when you asked for mamayu to be haunted instead, i thought the idea was fresh. i mean..if it's kamiki then i think it would have been easier because he has ninomae everywhere inside him gahhh haha

thank youuuuu for your timmeee TTvTT
you're my only ryuko supporter

[yukitan]

I think you must exercise that forte every week!! >:3

Hehehe, at first I just thought like um the road is too tough since Mayuko like being barefoot and all.
And then after a few hours, my second thought is that it's too tough to bury the body parts, so all those chemicals can help dissipated them. ^^;;

Wouldn't it be harder if it's Kamiki, since NinomaeKamiki is pretty confident in himself, unlike Mayuko who has flaws. I wondered how Mayuko will be haunting him. It would be just like, should I kill you again? Okay bye bye. *stop thinking* or something. XD;;