The Last Chapter - L/V - NC-17 - rindee

May 05, 2007 06:12


Title:  The Last Chapter
Author:  Rindee
Characters/Pairing:  Logan/Veronica
Word Count:  17,131
Rating:  NC-17, sexual situations, implied violence, language
Summary:  AU future fic:  Veronica and Logan broke up near the end of their junior year at Hearst, and have gone their separate ways ever since.  Spoilers through 3.16.

A/N:  Written for the ( Read more... )

alternative ending, l/v, rindee, vm_library challenge, au future fic

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inthevast May 6 2007, 00:54:13 UTC
flickering glow of the rainbow florescents as she rolled her suiter down the endless United terminal

I've been there and I love how you are weaving in all these real details, though it makes since because you lived there so long! I still just really love your descriptions of Chicago, makes me remember so much. I went there for fun for a weekend with a friend in the fall and I know all about this whip like wind you speak of, I was stupid enough to not bring a heavy jacket with me for a concert and had to sit outside so when Logan didn't wear a scarf and hat I was worried for him... Haaa.

And I just love your descriptions and dialogue, like the banter between Veronica and Keith, it's so much fun. And then there's Veronica's interactions with her co-workers, everything is so layered. Another detail I really liked was Veronica's tiny doll table, definitely fitting for someone living the life of a nun like Wallace said.

Even the weather reminded him of Veronica, picture-perfect on the surface, but cold and brittle when you were out in ( ... )

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moire2 May 6 2007, 01:11:51 UTC
There are so many wonderful things about this fic! The details here are priceless! For instance: the picture you painted of of Chicago, the description of the cold, the way Logan jerks off in the shower... all brilliant!

Your voice in this story really reeled me in. I can't wait to see how this finishes.

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kou_shun_u May 6 2007, 14:09:14 UTC
defineatly a high quality fic.

dude man, chicago has the worst pedestrians.

knew pizza was going to make its way in and glad logan didnt say ny has the best because thats an 1.5hr from there.

hoping to see the boys make a bigger part next.

happy that wallace gave up the info.

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