Comments | rinalin: Fic: Coffee Flavored & Stillness (The Inside)

rinalin

Fic: Coffee Flavored & Stillness (The Inside)

May 16, 2006 20:31

I know many of you are waiting for me to get back to Firefly fic. And I will. I plead lack of time and an unhealthy affection for Special Agent Love.

I do have a week off coming up at the end of June, and I hope to spend some time getting all the plot bunnies out of my head.

In the mean time, two fics for the Inside Table:

Title: Coffee Flavored
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fanfic, table, rebecca, paul, the inside, web, prompts, danny

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bookaddict43 May 17 2006, 06:27:20 UTC

These two are great. I like the coffee flavoured jelly beans in the first one and like Danny's resolve in the second.

frickineddie May 17 2006, 23:50:59 UTC

These were great. I loved Coffee Flavored, it was very sweet. ANd realistic in the way that Paul was watching Rebecca.

Stillness was great too. It gave me chills.

rinalin May 18 2006, 02:38:00 UTC

*grin*

Thank you!

I don't particularly like the mess that is Paul/Rebecca, but I kinda like Paul and how tortured he is by her.

frickineddie May 19 2006, 21:06:55 UTC

I don't really like the whole Paul/Rebecca thing either but the way you wrote him watching and observing her was very true to the series in my opinion.

rinalin May 20 2006, 02:51:49 UTC

I'm glad you thought so! Thanks again.

*is tired and incoherent*

Sorry!

karanina May 18 2006, 10:29:07 UTC

OMG She saved the jellybeans for him! That is SO CUTE!!! And a little Rebecca blush - I can just see it.

And number two! i loved at the end how she had to look away cos I think she recognised some of herself in Danny's eyes, and she wouldn't want that for him

Wonderful duet!

rinalin May 18 2006, 13:02:21 UTC

*grin*

Thank you!

I think you're right. She saw something of herself in Danny in that last one.

nomdeploom May 28 2006, 15:38:44 UTC

Awhh jellybeans was the cute...and I can see jayne... i mean danny...so well in that last one. oh yah. great job.

rinalin May 28 2006, 16:36:31 UTC

*giggles*

Well, you know...Jayne and Danny? Two sides of the same coin.

*drools*

connorblue July 29 2006, 06:23:06 UTC

I don't know how I found your site, but I really enjoy your writing! I can't wait to read more of it! great job! I especially like the jelly bean one!

rinalin July 29 2006, 06:30:38 UTC

Hee! Thanks!

Hope you continue to enjoy them! It makes me all squishy to have someone new take notice!

connorblue July 29 2006, 10:41:17 UTC

Your welcome. I'm a huge Adam Baldwin fan, so of course I loved The Inside and I'm glad to find some great Fics!

rinalin July 29 2006, 16:22:01 UTC

If you want more Adam Baldwiny Inside goodness, aliaspiral has written some great stuff too!

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