Fic: Broken in Whole

[rinalin]

Title: Broken in Whole
Author: Rinny
Characters: Wash/River/Mal
Word Count: 626
Notes: Post-BDM. Crack!fic? Why, yes… yes it is. And who do we blame?

Comments

[aliaspiral]

EEIIH!! evidently, you are on the best crack EVER.

She was they and he was her.

is just so so lovely. the whole thing is poetry. (poetry on crack, but still poetry.)

[rinalin]

*cuddles*

It's all due to you. You made me jealous with all your poetical writings and I had to try and copycat.

[literarylemming]

Guess who recced me here? ;)

Beautiful!

[rinalin]

*snuggles Alia* She is the bestest, isn't she?

[literarylemming]

She is! If only for reccing beautiful fics like this!

Also, everything is her fault, I've come to this decision. Do you agree?

[rinalin]

She is. Like seriously.

She is responsible for every crack fic I've ever written.

*loves her for it*

[van]

And Mal looks into brown eyes and sees blue.

What a perfect ending! Seriously, this is such crack, and yet you really did it well. It's confusing in places, but I think it's meant to be, so you reread and understand who is where and doing what. Brilliant job. Ahahahaaha.

Mal/Wash/River! EEE.

[rinalin]

*grin*

It's not crack if it doesn't make sense, right?

I'm glad you like the last line. I came up with it half way through and had a hell of a time tying it all together.

[meinterrupted]

*blinks* *reads again*

Wow. That's...wow. Um, can I get back to you on this? (And if this is what you call crack fic, you need to start sharing. No, really.)

[rinalin]

*blushes*

Take all the time you need.

All the crack I get comes from aliaspiral, so better start hitting her up. ;)

[cathiexx]

Oh yes. Poetic and twisting and PAINFUL and lovely. Well done you.

When he was they and she was his she glowed and Mal watched.

Beautiful. And as has been said, the last line is terrific. Just, utter perfection.