Title: Broken in Whole Author: Rinny Characters: Wash/River/Mal Word Count: 626 Notes: Post-BDM. Crack!fic? Why, yes… yes it is. And who do we blame?
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What a perfect ending! Seriously, this is such crack, and yet you really did it well. It's confusing in places, but I think it's meant to be, so you reread and understand who is where and doing what. Brilliant job. Ahahahaaha.
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She was they and he was her.
is just so so lovely. the whole thing is poetry. (poetry on crack, but still poetry.)
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It's all due to you. You made me jealous with all your poetical writings and I had to try and copycat.
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Beautiful!
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Also, everything is her fault, I've come to this decision. Do you agree?
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She is responsible for every crack fic I've ever written.
*loves her for it*
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What a perfect ending! Seriously, this is such crack, and yet you really did it well. It's confusing in places, but I think it's meant to be, so you reread and understand who is where and doing what. Brilliant job. Ahahahaaha.
Mal/Wash/River! EEE.
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It's not crack if it doesn't make sense, right?
I'm glad you like the last line. I came up with it half way through and had a hell of a time tying it all together.
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Wow. That's...wow. Um, can I get back to you on this? (And if this is what you call crack fic, you need to start sharing. No, really.)
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Take all the time you need.
All the crack I get comes from aliaspiral, so better start hitting her up. ;)
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When he was they and she was his she glowed and Mal watched.
Beautiful. And as has been said, the last line is terrific. Just, utter perfection.
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