Drabbles

[rinalin]

This is the last of the drabbles I promised. Sorry kaseitomodatchi that it took so long! Based on the song Must Be Dreaming, by FrouFrou.

Comments

[kaseitomodatchi]

There was no deadline, so you’re weren’t “late” at all. :) I hope you didn’t feel pressured to do them or stressed or anything-and that they maybe helped a little with those pesky creative juices

[rinalin]

I find it ironic and comforting that she finds her eye-opener in Jayne, of all people. Nice way to twist those two together. :)

I do like to twist people who don't normally belong together. Thank you!

The thought is rather chilling, but at least he isn’t happy about the fact, and that is a little consoling.

You know, when I was writing this, in my head "the man who must be stopped" wasn't Simon. It was Dobson. But I guess that didn't come through too clear. But the who wasn't all that important, it was that Book had to make the decision to conciously hurt Kaylee.

The inquisitive and naïve falling for the torn and bitter, I love it. You actually made this pairing work, I think.

Really? Cause they are so tough for me. But I'm working on them. Thank you!

[aikakone]

Responding to "Ambush". I like Mal/River and I like things from Mal's POV. This you've done well, and I enjoyed reading your ficlet. Thanks!

And your Jayne layout (or whatever you'd have it called) is just HOT.

[rinalin]

Hee, thanks! Mal is always kind of a wild card when I write him. Sometimes perfect in character and sometimes very much not.

And *sigh* I know. Adam is so gorgeous it makes me cry.

[hangedwoman]

Poor Mal! I can totally see him feeling like that, like "How the hell did this happen?"

Though I don't much go in for Book having had that kind of ulterior motive, the way you wrote that was still stunning.

And of course Jayne breaks my heart. Those emotions coming through loud and clear in his eyes, yeah, I can see Inara seeing that. But I also had to show you this icon because I squeed when you used that metaphor I love so very much (you can tell because this is the extent of my crappy icon making skills). :)

[rinalin]

Thank you! I like the icon.

[ana_grrl]

Instead, she’d used her other skills to disguise the fact that being left to wait made her wish to scream from the top of her lungs.

This is a very interesting consideration of Inara's character. VERY interesting! I like it!

[mutelorelei]

The Inara one was very cool, and subtle. The Mal one was quite funny :) .