Comments | rinalin: Fic: Slow Burn

rinalin

Fic: Slow Burn

Jan 04, 2006 23:56

Title: Slow Burn
Author: Rinny
Characters: Simon/Zoe (yes...you read that right)
Word Count: 730
Rating: G
Summery: Post BDM. I tried to challenge aliaspiral to write Zoe/Simon fic and make it believable. Somehow, I ended up writing it. If I don't suck completely, there will be further parts to this. But in case there isn't...I bring you the other product of my ( Read more... )

fanfic, zoe, simon, alia's fault

Comments 18

johnnies_darlin January 5 2006, 17:24:16 UTC

Squee! Awww, this was so sweet. I don't know that Zoe and Simon would ever go any farther than this (he is _way_ too serious and... soft - for lack of a better word - for her), but this much at least I can totally see happening. Everyone would be walking on eggshells around Zoe, and she's too proud or stubborn or just plain unaccustomed to admit to anyone that she really is vulnerable, and needs something as simple as physical contact.

Very nicely done, and true to character for both of them.

erinya January 5 2006, 17:48:02 UTC

Very well done! I love unusual 'ships, especially unusual het 'ships. You've captured the characters so well, and I especially appreciate the depth you've given to Simon who seems to suffer from a lot of cardboard characterization...he's more than just a prig, a foil, or an awkward schoolboy in this...and more, too, than his relationship to River.

rinalin January 5 2006, 18:34:51 UTC

Thank you!

I'm really glad that that came through. Your insight is much appreciated, that's the angle I want to persue for Simon. That feeling like his indentity is limited to Dr. Tam and Simon's sister... Zoe will some how remind him that he is more than that.

meinterrupted January 5 2006, 18:37:10 UTC

This is surprisingly good. I never thought Simon/Zoe would ever work, but this does, somehow.

ANd now you know I have to write this pairing for 22_lovers. *ponders*

rinalin January 5 2006, 19:27:13 UTC

Hee! I want to read that!

I need to get started on that. I have almost all my stories planned out.

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rinalin January 5 2006, 19:32:10 UTC

Aww, thank you! I'm glad that it seems believable, I'm kinda excited to see if I can make it work.

thegranddewru January 5 2006, 19:20:00 UTC

*Strangles you* LOL Is that what you were afraid of? Hee. I like it, it was well done as always. Mostly, I like you writing Simon. I'm still not convinced of her actually being attracted to him though. But I could see her needing touch. It's hard to go without especially when you are used to it, and poor Zoe where can she go? But Simon has a good excuse.