Comments | rinaandorithain: An Ordinary Life (Merlin 8/8)

rinaandorithain

An Ordinary Life (Merlin 8/8)

Oct 11, 2010 12:12

( The weather was unseasonably cold, even for north Wales, and snow pelted the windshield of the heavy SUV that was inching itself up an unplowed, barely marked road. The driver cursed under his breath, fighting the wheel and the slick conditions until the latter won out and the SUV ended up in a ditch. )

slash, fic, au, merlin

Comments 18

lovers21spit October 11 2010, 16:37:24 UTC

After last chapter I thought why would this need another because it already had a happy ending.
But after reading this - this is just brilliant. And it made me cry. It's just that beautiful <3
Like the one thing we all could dream of happening to us someday.

rinaandorithain October 13 2010, 19:23:15 UTC

Oh, thank you so much for the compliment! Glad the extra part worked for you, we just wanted 'real' Arthur and Merlin back together i nthe end.

arthur_angel October 11 2010, 18:01:21 UTC

O wow. This is so beautiful. It is so happy, but for some reason it made me cry. You so well write real love and real need.

rinaandorithain October 13 2010, 19:23:42 UTC

Thank you so much!

lyfeisoverrated October 11 2010, 19:07:16 UTC

Awww I loved this entire fic. The premise has been done but without this type of execution. Well done! This is my favorite part though. Cuz our boys are reunited again with Arthur as himself.

Oh and in the ending dialogue: "If you're gone when I wake up, I'm going to be very unhappy about all this," Merlin grumbled, settling over Merlin again.

I think you mean "settling over Arthur again" yes? Just thought you'd like to know.

rinaandorithain October 13 2010, 19:24:25 UTC

Whoops, thank you! Yes, Merlin didn't suddenlly duplicate himself and it's fixed now ;) So glad you enjoyed it!

wldcatsprstr_14 October 11 2010, 20:28:54 UTC

This was lovely. I followed it the whole way and it didn't ever disappoint. Wonderful job.

rinaandorithain October 13 2010, 19:26:32 UTC

Thank you for staying with us and for the feedback!

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rinaandorithain October 13 2010, 19:28:34 UTC

Thank you so much! We knew all along that we wanted Merlin to get Arthur back in the end, but wanted him happy along the way. Glad it worked!