Fic: An Ordinary Life (Merlin, 7/8)

[rinaandorithain]

Comments

[ree_rhea]

I love this story ^_^ Only one more part to go thou T_T

I just caught this spelling/word usage mistake:

A short time later, Arthur returned from the bakery, a pink box tied with string held in one hand. He opened the door and leaned in, handing the box over before climbing in and belting himself in. "No peaking," he ordered.

It should be 'peeking' there not 'peaking' ^_^

[rinaandorithain]

Whoops, thanks so much for catching that, it got through both of us!

[newbiereader]

There's a really nice feel about this story. I like the idea that when Arthur re-incarnates, it doesn't have to be a save-the-world scenario every time. I also like your sex scenes. There's just one little error thing I noticed in this latest bit - you have Arthur carry Rhys upstairs to the bedroom, and next minute they are making love, but they never actually undressed nor did Merlin magic their clothes away. Hope you don't mind me4 mentioning it, but you're not the only writer to have done this and I always notice it.

[rinaandorithain]

Thanks for catching and pointing that out to us. It's something we try to watch for since we know we have a habit of doing that as we write, but obviously we missed it this time. We've fixed it now.

[verob2002]

sigh :)