Comments | rina9294: Bait and Switch (H50, Steve/Danny, PG-13)

rina9294

Bait and Switch (H50, Steve/Danny, PG-13)

Jul 05, 2011 18:12

Crossover with the Ocean's Trilogy, sequel to What Happens in Vegas and The Two Man Job

( Danny woke to an aching head and the feel of a hard, gritty surface pressed against his cheek. The sound of muffled voices reached him, but he couldn't understand what they were saying, just that one sounded pissed and the other agitated - and somehow familiar. )

fic, slash, hawaii five-0

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abbeyrd62561 July 6 2011, 04:37:08 UTC

I love a story with the Ocean's trilogy and five-O together. I love the last one and I really enjoyed this one too. I hope you write more to this, I'd love to see how dinner goes....excellent I just enjoyed this to pieces

rina9294 July 6 2011, 22:01:23 UTC

Thanks so much :) The thought of that dinner terrifies me just from the sheer amount of snark that would be at the table - but it would be amusing as well... Glad you enjoyed it!

sgflutegirl July 6 2011, 05:03:28 UTC

Just read all three of these fics. Loved them!

I laughed when Turk used Charlie as his alias. It's been forever since I've seen Varsity Blues. :D

rina9294 July 6 2011, 22:02:27 UTC

Ding ding ding! You win the Turk alias prize ;) So glad you enjoyed them and thanks for commenting!

sgflutegirl July 6 2011, 22:12:43 UTC

Awesome!!

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rina9294 July 6 2011, 22:03:06 UTC

Thanks and right now I'm done with them, but you never know what those four might get up to ;)

bfive0 July 6 2011, 11:13:31 UTC

That was awesome & hilarious xD I read all the three fics on 1 go xD

rina9294 July 6 2011, 22:03:36 UTC

Thanks so much, glad you enjoyed them!

kitmerlot1213 July 6 2011, 12:12:00 UTC

I like that Danny knows the whole truth about Steve and Turk and that even though he was kidnapped, Danny's still such a good detective that he could tell that "Charlie" was way too calm about the whole situation.

And I would love to see the Steve/Danny/Linus/Turk dinner--that ought to be made of awesome :)

rina9294 July 6 2011, 22:06:45 UTC

One of my goals for this story was to get the truth to come out regarding what happened in Vegas but to have it done in such a way that Danny couldn't fixate on it - and with the kidnapping, I didn;t want Danny (or Turk) to be the damsels in distress having to be rescued by Steve and Linus.

As for the dinner, that may just have to be imagined, the scene froze my mind!

Thanks so much!