What Happens in Vegas (Hawaii Five-0, NC-17)

[rina9294]

Many thanks to serenity_pen and sastiel for the beta work!

Comments

[knotted_rose]

I loved this. Now I need to go watch the Ocean's movies again! (11 and 13, there was no 12.)

[purple_spock]

There was only one funny line in 12 and it so isn't worth it. : P I agree. Just skip 12

[rina9294]

I have to agree ;) I only watch parts of 12 - specifically Turk and Linus (and Basher) doing their plotting because it feeds my Turk and Linus ship.

Thanks so much and glad to give you an excuse to watch the two good movies!

[sastiel]

YAY! It's up!! Weee!

Amazing job hon!

And you are certainly welcome for the beta!

[rina9294]

And thank you again! Really appreciated the help :)

[imkalena]

How nice! Although I wouldn't mind seeing what happens next. :)

[rina9294]

Thanks! AndI'm owrking on what happens next, the plot has just taken a different path than I had planned...

[amycoolz]

I freaking love you for writing this. And omg, I totally ship Turk and Linus, too. This was so epic; thanks for sharing. :D

[rina9294]

Thank you! The story started out with Turk being single then I was informed by the voice in my head that he damn well was with Linus, they just have an arrangement *grin*

[purple_spock]

Okay, onto my actual comment. I just absolutely loved this. I have seen Ocean's 11 so many times I have it memorized, and Turk was always my favourite character. Every time you referenced one of the characters it made me smile, and the thought of Turk and Linus together made me really giggly. I also love how descriptive you were about everything. And this line "undoing the cuffs first before moving to the line of black discs that bisected the firm expanse of his chest" was just so poetic and really great. Final note, I love how Steve can see the differences between Turk and Danny, and this: "realizing that there was no comparison between Danny and Turk, at least not in his mind." was just so perfect and so sweet. Wow that was a long comment. It was such a great fic though, and when I was it I got really excited and couldn't wait to read it. And as it turns out, my anticipation was well placed. Great job. : D

[rina9294]

Wow, thank you so much for taking the time to comment! I love the Ocean's movies (though I shake my head at 12 and ff a lot of it) and I wanted to try to bring some references in without losing people who had never seen them before. Writing Steve's POV is always an adventure for me so I really tried to concentrate on what he was seeing and doing so I had a firm basis for his reactions. Turk and Virgil may bicker like Danny and Steve, but that's really the only similarity between Turk and Danny so I wanted to get that out as well, glad it worked!

Thank you again :) and now back to work on Danny's reaction...