[Writer's Club DEC] Afterlife Appointment [original story]

Jan 12, 2012 18:31

Title: Afterlife Appointment
Author: rin_no_himitsu (me!)
Genre: Drama, General, Friendship
Rating: T (PG-13)
Summary: Last year, I ignored you when you were in need of a friend. This year, I'll give you the greatest Christmas present you could ever wish for.
A/N: What I actually submitted to the Writer's Club. It's supposed to be heartwarming! Not sad! D:

Monday. The park was deserted when I arrived. )

!genre: general, !genre: friendship, !rating: t, !genre: drama, writing: original story

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adrian_dakota January 13 2012, 15:23:39 UTC
So much for having bad writing. Your writing is good. I mean, very very good. I mean, I-should-be-writing-now-but-instead-I'm-reading-this good.

Time for me to feel guilty and start writing.

Keep writing; Tara~

-- Adrian

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rin_no_himitsu January 13 2012, 22:48:52 UTC
kfajdsfkl No it's not. D: I BS'd this in an hour at one am in the morning. D; There's so many loose ends, inconsistent verb tenses, etc. Plus it's hard to understand since I left out some vital information. OTL|||

Haha~ Good luck with your story/-ies! :)

(And I think I asked this when I replied to your PM, but w-what does Tara mean? :'D //is a fail. OTL)

- Saki.

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