Pierrot

Nov 09, 2013 19:15

Title: Pierrot
Author: Rilakumabear
Rating: PG
Pairing: Homin/Minho
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rating: pg, author: r, media: fan fic

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ar_imora November 10 2013, 02:25:26 UTC
This is so damn cute. It made me smile so hard. ^^

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rilakumabear November 10 2013, 18:41:12 UTC
Ehhehe thank you <3

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sulking_angel November 10 2013, 03:46:36 UTC
Wow this was really cute. Poor changminnie at the bottom of the bin, yunho is such a sweetheart ^^ loved the ending, thanks for sharing :)

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rilakumabear November 10 2013, 18:41:35 UTC
Thanks for reading ^^

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grumpybiscuit November 10 2013, 09:12:37 UTC
i have a feeling than changmin will forever stick with yunho no matter what happens. yunho wouldn't mind that for sure.

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rilakumabear November 10 2013, 18:42:24 UTC
Haha I'm sure your comment applies to real life as well as my little fic :D Thanks for reading :)

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buzbean November 10 2013, 11:40:59 UTC
wow, love this so much
love all the details in the earlier part, before meeting yunho
changmin is really strong
glad yunho found him

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rilakumabear November 10 2013, 18:42:50 UTC
Thank you for reading ^_^

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limerentia November 10 2013, 17:30:11 UTC
Loved this story! You managed to paint the picture of Changmin's experience of being left unchosen for several years, and the feelings of neglect, desperation and resignation were actually tangible as they passed. I also like that you tried to provide depth to the time prior to meeting Yunho (which of course we were all looking forward to) instead of just glossing over it; it made their meeting later on much much sweeter, meaningful and complete. Maybe after all Changmin wasn't really broken, maybe he was just waiting for the perfect owner, maybe he was just made for Yunho. I also adored the part where Yunho cut his strings and gave him freedom in more ways than one, and Changmin choosing to stay with him always. It's just so... otp-like of them. /cries

It's a touching piece I'm glad to have stumbled upon. Thank you for writing this! c:

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rilakumabear November 10 2013, 18:47:44 UTC
Thank you for the comment. You got it completely right, Changmin was never a broken toy, he was just unwanted because of his supposedly odd-looking features. He just needed the right person to accept and love him for everything he is and isn't. I'm glad you picked up on the string-cutting bit. In my head, it was symbolic of his new freedom as a loved toy and then human. And the fact that despite his freedom, he chose to stay beside Yunho forever. Sorry for the rambling comment, but I'm just happy someone got that! Thanks for reading! ^^

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