TMP fic: Cloud Maybe

[rikyl]

Title: Cloud Maybe
Pairing: Mindy/Danny
Word Count: 1900
Rating: PG
Summary: Just a short little scene after the end of 1x23. Was supposed to be a drabble but got a little longer.

Comments

[princess_george]

Hey, another one! I really like this, as always. You've pulled off the really neat trick of making her kinda sorta almost maybe sideways out of the corner of her eye realize something that she isn't quiiiiiiiite ready to admit to herself. And captured his unease. And reminded me that I haven't seen the triathlon episode.

Nicely done all round!

[rikyl]

Thank you! I'm finding writing characters who don't know or aren't admitting how the feel for each other to be really weird and different, so I'm glad you think it's working.

Go watch Triathlon and then come back and talk to me about things.

[rikyl]

Thanks, I'm glad to hear you think the voices are working!

[bantam_shine]

This was perfect. You write Mindy & Danny's voices so well! (Morgan's too. I was cracking up at the part with the puppy.) Hopefully Mindy will contemplate marrying Danny like in your fic. *swoons*

[rikyl]

I don't even know how Morgan got to play such a big part in this fic! I just needed him to hand the camera to Mindy, and he wouldn't get out. :)

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

[quisinart4]

Thanks so much for the post-ep fic! I admit, I'm a sucker for angst and would love something like this where Danny realizes just how serious Mindy/Casey's relationship has gotten compared to the other guys she's dated in the past. Chris Messina would do those sad puppy eyes so well! So I really like how you did this in the sense that Mindy can't help but be more aware of her feelings for Danny since the hand grab in "Santa Fe", but its' like she doesn't understand why she's feeling this way or recognize those feelings

[rikyl]

Thank you for this