Comments | rikyl: Fic: A Tour of Pawnee

rikyl

Fic: A Tour of Pawnee

Dec 14, 2011 22:28

Title: A Tour of Pawnee
Word Count: ~9,900
Spoilers: The Master Plan (seriously, I'm going that far back)
Rating: Hard R, I guess? It takes a long time to get there though.
Summary: An answer to this kinkmeme prompt: "Leslie meets Ben at a bar the first night he gets into town. Somehow work never comes up, and they end up sleeping together. Please ( Read more... )

fic, ben/leslie, parks and recreation

Comments 60

throwingpens December 15 2011, 05:14:41 UTC

OH MY GOD.

I don't...the narration from Leslie and her drunk babbling and Ben just going with it and the JACK LONDON QUOTES oh my god the Jack London quotes. Gaaaah.

I don't even...
This was amazing.

Simply amazing.

rikyl December 15 2011, 23:06:25 UTC

Ha ha, thanks! I wondered if I went a little overboard with the London quotes, but I'm glad you liked it so much!

princess_george December 15 2011, 05:23:50 UTC

Stunning. This was really. Well. My goodness.

/fans self

/collapses in admiration

rikyl December 15 2011, 23:30:50 UTC

*blushes*

I never know how to respond to comments like this. Just, thank you!

princess_george December 15 2011, 23:35:06 UTC

Hee, I was not at my most articulate either! Really this was great, so well done, nicely crafted.

And hot as all get out, too.

There you go, respond to that! Ha!

cacklecats December 15 2011, 05:27:03 UTC

AH a response to my prompt! I was so into the idea that I actually started writing my own fic, but I'm so glad somebody else took a crack at it :) This is seriously cute. I want more early Leslie/Ben fic please!

rikyl December 15 2011, 23:32:09 UTC

Yay! I'm glad you liked it. It was an awesome prompt and fun to write. I would love to see what you do with it though. I adore the couple early-timeline fics you've written already.

sullen_aquarian December 15 2011, 05:30:13 UTC

Is it greedy of me to want a Part 2? Really, who knew snowglobes and city tours could be that sexy. Also, thank you for clarifying what Leslie's other most awkward boob grab was.

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wanda505 February 27 2012, 20:56:04 UTC

I'll chime in my agreement about having a part two that goes AU. Although I do love how it meets up with canon as well. But dear LORD was that an awesome story.

rikyl February 27 2012, 22:24:18 UTC

Thanks! If I ever had an idea for what to do in a second part, I might try it. Really glad you liked it.

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sashanaa December 15 2011, 05:31:29 UTC

omg. this is GOLD. I like to believe that this actually happened.

rikyl December 15 2011, 23:34:44 UTC

Thanks so much!