Untitled pirate story

[rikkurd]

Kate stared into her half-filled mug.  She had been nursing her drink for the better part of an hour now, and she knew she would have to either move on or order another to not risk raising the ire of the tavern owners.    She already knew that the only reasons that they put up with having her kind in their “sophisticated” establishment was because

Comments

[olli01a]

An interesting start with a nice cliffhanger. I like how you build up the right atmosphere for a pirate story.

[rikkurd]

Thanks Olli;

Nice to see someone read and enjoyed. Wasn't too sure about the whole pirate thing, it being so cliche, but I think I might have a fun twist to it.

[olli01a]

A few days ago was a "Pirate Night" on one of our TV stations. Maybe I'm still in the mood for it?

*grin*

[quiethearted]

very nice. I really like what you have so far. I can't wait to read more.

[rikkurd]

Thank you so much. I wasn't really even sure if I was going to post to any of my communities, I just wanted to get it somewhere safe in case my computer gets destroyed...again.

Guess the pressure is on now. Gotta write the next part.