[Fic] Moments of Grace (for Lechaco) - part 2 of 2

[giving_ground]

[please read part one first]

Comments

[crystalusagi]

This hurt so good. And hurt a lot. The tone was perfectly maintained throughout the whole thing, and it all just makes me feel like I've just watched a really intense art film, along the lines of In the Mood for Love and such. Such solid writing, too. ♥ I really, really like this fic.

it also made me a little teary-eyed It certainly made me angst.

[giving_ground]

Awww, thank you so much. ;; I'm really flattered! ♥

[giving_ground]

♥♥♥

Renji deserves some sort of award for patience and sanity in the face of Yukimura. >>;;;;

>)

[giving_ground]

Thank you ever so much. :)

[kiriana]

Oh.. wow. I was pretty teary-eyed at some parts. As sad and bitter as some scenes were, it was great to see that they have to work at their relationships. It's not all easy and hearts and flowers.

Wonderful story. <3

[giving_ground]

Thank you! That's sort of what I was hoping for. :)

♥

[lechaco]

That was such a good bittersweet story! I really enjoyed your efforts to write about their life outside of tennis. I really want to say more but I don't have time right now so I'll come back with more squeeing!! Just one more thing: NiouYuki FTW!!! omg omg *cries*

Thank you so much anon-san~~ <3333333

PS: haha Murakami.

[giving_ground]

*grinnnnn* I did my best to oblige! I wasn't sure if the angst would be overstepping the mark, though... I'm relieved!

♥

The Murakami was in there already and then you started mentioning it a while after I'd written it and I had to LOL. :D