Wicked Games Chapter 7 - Get You Dancing with the Devil

[rightonrighton]

Chapter 7 - Get You Dancing with the Devil

A/N: See chapter one for warnings and disclaimers.

Maura is on her back, soft tumbles of spun-gold curls ringing her face like a halo. The sleeping fairy-tale princess, moon-pale skin and blood-red lips, eyes open but unseeing

Comments

[just_liv]

Damn, I could totally picture Jane going for Dean's head. I was actually hoping for it. And then Maura is talking about her needs and Jane's needs and I don't know if I should laugh or hide in awkwardness (Maura may not be feeling it, but I'm feeling for her). Probably both.
And then Jane, poor Jane. It's as if Hoyt broke her into pieces and she did her best to put it all together and glue it with duck tape. But she got it all mixed up. Nothing is working as it should. The brain is filled with bad circuits, like a defective engine, and the heart seems to be missing (probably misplaced). I can't wait to see Maura putting the pieces together. But I know that she very likely is going to get hurt while doing it so. Is like watching a train accident in real time. It's going to hurt like hell, but I cannot not watch it. I can barely wait.
Ps: Sorry for the long comment =P

[rightonrighton]

Long comments are awesome! Thank you, so glad you're enjoying it. :)

[jetboo]

Wow. Poor Janie is seriously fucked up. I guess this is still going to get worse before it gets better? Or that's my 3am can't sleep brain attempting to think.

At any rate, provocative and damn well written my friend. :)

[rightonrighton]

Forgot to respond, oops!

In my mind this is where it starts to get fun. But your mileage may vary. :)

[jetboo]

No worries!

Hopefully there will be more soon? That's about as nudgy as I get. I'm not one to push a writer, it seems quite rude.

[shemp_o2stk]

I've just discovered this amazing fic, read all 7 parts all today and dying to read more... so fraking good!

mucho love!

[rightonrighton]

Aww, thanks! That is so awesome to hear. :)

[slashpony]

That scene in the car is actually quite chilling. It's good that you're giving us more insight in her demons because some of her observations of Maura are horrible. But at least she's honest with herself and about the original purpose of their bet: "And now I want to rip his fucking face off because he hurt her. I am fucking losing it. The whole plan was to hurt her."

Update?

[r_slat]

Hope all is well with you. I was just thinking about this story and realizing its been quite a while since your last update. Hope you haven't given up on it- definitely one of my favorites stories.