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Fic: Pick a Star on the Dark Horizon

May 18, 2008 18:04

Title: Pick a Star on the Dark Horizon
Characters: Sark, Vaughn, Marshall, Missy, Dan, Juliet, the Doctor, Des, Martha, Ariel, Sam, Jack, two mentions of April, and another implied appearance by Nonexistent Pre-Pilot Rift!Sydney. (I AM INSTIGATING NOTHING... Ai just had a request.)
Pairings: It's... Honestly, mostly gen, actually. I think. That one ( Read more... )

character: martha jones, character: ariel smith, character: juliet burke, character: desmond descant, character: marshall flinkman, character: julian sark, character: missy ashford, character: daniel faraday, character: jack harkness, author: kawaiispinel, character: sam tyler, character: the doctor, fiction

Comments 7

allfireburns May 19 2008, 00:01:57 UTC

Eeeheee. Sam inadvertently calls Sark's bullshit. (Well, everyone's bullshit. Poor Sam.) I am deeply amused. And oh, Sark. Why must he and April be adorable? Why?

*Gigglefits* Oh, MARSHALL. Baby. Poor ickle guinea pig Marshall. *Squeals at him somewhat embarrassingly*

Oh, MISSY. Logan adores her. In that slightly creepy way demons do... We need to bring in the crazy badass demon chicks soon.

Daniel. Daniel. Break my heart, why don't you? *Flailyhands* Juliet too, but... DANIEL.

*Laughs so hard she has a coughing fit* Oh. Oh. So much love for the OT3. And the DOCTOR. *Gleefits* Yes. So right. Absolutely. (Though, really, Des? ReallyThat poor doomed coffee shop. Really. We are going to have to destroy it at least once a season. Right about when the plague is over and the quarantine's broken? Someone from the hotel please try to go to that coffee shop only to find out it's been burned down in a riot. PLEASE. And the last line just... killed me. Because it is so true. Oh, Des. (The Doctor rolls his eyes at you. And humanity in general ( ... )

kawaiispinel May 19 2008, 00:22:35 UTC

*flails* I have no idea! But it scares me, because it's so bad on so many levels. REALLY, IT IS. *clings*

XD I'm not allowed to make guniea pig!Marshall canon even if it would be cute. XD Torchwood 4 cannot have it's tech guy turning into a guinea pig at inopportune moments... And Gene might try to eat him out of spite for Torchwood or something. I have no idea. OH MARSHALL. *loves him*

Yes. Yes, we do. *nods* They are not afraid of plague, even if the plague is almost over.

I've decided that Daniel doesn't even have to do anything to break hearts. HE JUST STANDS THERE IN CANON LOOKING LOST AND CONFUSED AND MY HEART DIES. Ngh. Poor baby. I luffs him.

I wrote that because there always has to be OT3 even if it kills me trying to write the three of them... Well, two of them anyway. XD And oh Des. How he got more intoxicated than Martha, the world does not want to know.

YES, THAT TOTALLY NEEDS TO HAPPEN. *flails* I approve of doomed coffee shops.

*innocent* It's sad that you don't even get to see how ridiculous his obsession with ( ... )

armageddoni May 19 2008, 01:26:03 UTC

VAUGHN YOU ARE VERY MEAN!!! PLAY NICE!!! (It's bad how happy it makes Vaughn that he did that to Sark. Poor baby...)

AND GUINIA PIG MARSHALL YOU ARE SO ADORABLE!!!

Oh Missy. If/when she and Vaughn meet up... ngh. It will not be good. At ALL. It will be breaky. And... ngh. Bad. But in a good way. Because yes, abuse is so fun.

AND YOU USED THE DIALOGUE!!! (You just KNOW Sark's going to be the one to find Vaughn once he comes through, too. Because that's how it works.)

Um, yes, these all were amazing once again and you rock and kick ass and do other things. You're like the Katya of the Rift drabbles. *nod*

kawaiispinel May 19 2008, 01:34:16 UTC

*giggles* Sam probably shouldn't be anywhere near those two, just because Sark trying to deny anything to Vaughn will probably wind up killing him in pain.

I LOVE GUINEA PIG!MARSHALL. *giggles*

Ohhhh yes. Missy will be bad for him. Of course, if there is Sydney, she'll probably try to eat her face and that will be even worse.

YES, I DID. I loved it too much not to use it.(Ohhhh yes. I intend to make it so.)

HEE. THANKS. *laughs evilly* I enjoy being the Katya of Rift drabbles. *glees*

varymydays May 19 2008, 02:31:34 UTC

SQUEE!!!! Oh, your Rift!fic makes me so very happy in ways that cannot be properly expressed.

I don't even know where to BEGIN.

First of all, these are all so beautifully written. I love your writing style. It's very character driven and just so amazing. Great transitions and dialogue and I just get lost in the whirlwind that is every single moment that you portray here. I love it all so much. :D

The Sark and April-ness is ridiculously adorable... and him being so ashamed/embarrassed after that, hahaha, PERFECT.

Awww, poor Marshall. Hehe. GUINEA PIG!!!

Missy, you intrigue me. I'm sadly in love with badass-ness so I think I'll fall for her. HEE.

Oh... ow Daniel and Juliet are making for the break, huh? Johnny like died. At some point during the plague. And I can't believe Martha's just like what am I supposed to do with the body? *smacks her in her emotionl numbness ( ... )

kawaiispinel May 19 2008, 03:02:48 UTC

*SNUGS* I LOVE YOU SO MUCH. YOUR COMMENTS MAKE ME HAPPY... Yes, that required capslock ♥

Sark and April make me happier than they should. SHE TOTALLY MAKES HIM HATE HIMSELF... And makes him hate that his badass reputation is sort of made of fail when he's around her. XD

It doesn't bode well for Marshall when I'm torturing him before he even gets in the Rift, does it? *giggles* Oh guinea pig!Marshall. Yes, turning people into rodents is fun, apparently ( ... )

doreyg May 19 2008, 18:22:09 UTC

*Loves it all*

*Especially the Torchwood, the coffee shop, the OT3 and anything involving the hellhound ones*

*Cannot speak for happy flailing*