Fic: Burn the Ships

[kawaiispinel]

Title: Burn the Ships
Characters: Des, Sark, Bianca, Vincent, Tammy, Marshall, Tosh, Martha, the Doctor, mentions of Kara and Romana, and a brief appearance by Sydney Bristow (with an implied encore and an equally implied appearance of Vaughn).
Pairing: Slight Bianca/Vincent, one-sided Sark/Sydney, brief Martha/Des/the Doctor, implied Vincent/Romana

Comments

[allfireburns]

...I apologize that all of these lack coherency. I just got back from a movie and processing is slower than usual. Also, I can't blame you for hating to write the Doctor. I have trouble with him half the time, and, y'know... I PLAY HIM

[kawaiispinel]

Hee! Considering, I lack coherency in reviews even on my not-ded days, I can't blame you. XD ♥! AND WHY IS HE SO HARD TO WRITE

[varymydays]

*SQUEE*!!!!!!!

Oh my gosh, I love it all so much!! :D

Seriously, the first one was such beautiful breaking. Awww. DES. Just... *wibble and flail* I love that you used that quote in there even if it made it more breaky.

And I agree, I felt bad for Sark. Awww, poor dear. ...*pets him*

IMPLIED ROMANA/VINCENT. WIN. I have ridiculous amounts of love for them and I don't even know why, but they're just awesome.

Oooh, I like Tammy a lot and Jake, too. I love wussy excuses for archangels. ^^ Really, it's a lot of fun when they're not good at what they're supposed to be good at, hehe. It's fun when they're good too, but- And the fact that she's perfect at it right up to the kill is so cool. Such a neat touch.

HEHE TOSH AND MARSHALL ARE CUTE. And you're really good at writing Tosh. I agree that she's fucking HARD to write. For me, at least, as well, but yes.

The last scene is so awesome. Totally my favorite, too. All of that dialogue was just perfect for it and I was squeeing like an idiot. It made me very happy. THEY'RE SO EFFING

[kawaiispinel]

*FLAILS* YAY, I'M SO GLAD YOU DO.

I loved that quote. It broke my heart when Kara said that to him and... Yeah, I blame that quote for why that fic exists among other things. Oh Des, please to not be breaking my heart so much.

XD Oh Sark. I like hurting him more than I should. IT'S BECAUSE I LOVE HIM, DAMMIT. *shifty*

Because they're crazy and badass? XD I have no idea why they are so awesome, but they are. Just because.

Heee! Oh Tammy, that aspect of her character just smacked me in the face recently and it made me flail so much. She just... Can't kill things. And it's adorable and breaky, and GUH. Poor baby. She's going to be freaking out when I bring her in and she starts having to work for Vincent and Romana.

I think I'm just... Whoverse-challenged? Because I swear every Doctor Who and Torchwood character doesn't let me write them, BUT YAY FOR NAILING TOSH. And oh Marshall. He and JD will get along well.. That's kinda frightening. (Well thank God I will probably never bring in Andrew like I thought about doing a loooong

[allfireburns]

Okay, I don't know why I'm randomly reading the comments on this a day later, but...

BUT YAY FOR NAILING TOSH.
I read that sentence TOTALLY WRONG. I blame the Owen in my head. *Facepalm*

[armageddoni]

"I don't see Vaughn tackling Sark. Just sayin'."

Oh, I wouldn't guarantee that. After all, Sark DID cheat with Lauren and, you know... ruined his life. So... who knows! *evil grin*

These are all FABULOUS, dear. SERIOUSLY. You killed me with each and every one. Especially the Sark/Sydney one. Just... *flails*

[kawaiispinel]

XD Des appears to think that CIA agents are above that kind of behavior. I could totally see it though. *smirks* Oh Sark's in for a world of hurt and he doesn't even know why. YAY WONKY TIMELINES!

Hee! Thank you so much!

Oh God, I torture Sark so much, but messing with his obsession with Sydney kills me more than anything does, just because he gets so worked up internally about it. Poor baby. *pets* I will do something nice for him eventually... Maybe.

[holdtothem]

*seconds the yay wonky timelines*

Oh the mindfuckery that will occur. And the PAIN. But I'm looking forward to it.

YES. I do the same thing to Vaughn, over that year of ow. And Lauren. And then I make myself watch that SCENE (from your favorite episode. Yes. THAT SCENE.) And yeah. I need to be nicer to my characters.

[kawaiispinel]

Hee. I feel bad for both of them, more for Vaughn though, simply because... Ow. It's gotta sting having to share a residence with the guy who tortured you, slept with your wife, and essentially ruined your life AND HE HASN'T EVEN DONE IT YET. At least Sark knows Vaughn can't stand him enough that his hostility towards him won't come as that much of a surprise... And because he's really that much of an ass, he'll probably get a kick out of annoying the hell out of him and goading him... Well, he will until Ariel comes along and kicks his ass so hard for it.... And then he'll just be more subtle about it. *facepalm* REALLY, SARK. A SOUL, GET ONE. And then use it around people who aren't April.

I think we all have to be nicer to our kids. Otherwise they'll do crazy things without our consent and we'll have to deal with the ramifications. God knows it happens with Des, the Doctor, and Martha all the time.

HAHAHAHA. THAT SCENE. Ow my soul. It's sad because Sark's that emotionally invested in April currently (in a wholly platonic way, of