[FIC] Sixty days of sweat and dirt / 3a

[hey_capn_jack]

Title: Sixty days of sweat and dirt
Part: Three/trailer
Word Count: 7500
Summary: The infamous Gary, Indiana: home of at least one wanderer, two demons, a creepy factory... and a moment of reckoning.
A/N: Sooner or later I just hit the KILL IT WITH FIRE stage on this fic and started throwing words at it to see what sticks. If nothing makes sense,

Comments

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[theslenderman]

jrkle;jar *flails* This is so awesome. Seriously. It was very engaging and INTENSE. I love all of your OCs, and I just love the way that you write. I like how it flows, and I love the imagery in all of this.

The Factory sat, squat and solid as an iron, near the edge of Lake Michigan.

Just THAT. It's concise, but still packs a punch. It's a solid description in only a few words, which is what I love to see in writing. Squat and solid as an iron. :) Anyway, that was just an example of imagery that I loved in this piece.

And the END. Augh. ._. They were both lost. It didn't matter. that's why I was so flailing so hard at the start of this comment. XD

Amazing work. Oh, Jason. I'm so, so glad we got to see more into the infamous Gary, Indiana.

[hey_capn_jack]

Hee. Thank you! (One day, I may work out what the heck that factory is/does. Rather than just being the FLCL factory. Or perhaps I'll leave it to other enterprising ficcers to decide.)

...I have to admit, I didn't think I'd like Brad as much as I ended up liking him, though most of the reason for that is in the final part. Which should hopefully not take MOST OF A YEAR TO WRITE argh.