The Only One: Chapter 1

[tiniedoll]

Title: The Only One
Author: tiniedoll 
Genre: AU, School Life, Romance, fail!humor
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: GTOP
Summary: Top has a very strange disorder but it seems G-D is the only one who can help him get over it.

Comments

[peacensafety]

I really liked this! Please write more, 'cause I like the little world you created here!

[tiniedoll]

Awww, thanks! :D
I was feeling a bit nervous cause I don't think anyone has a disorder like Top does XD so I didn't think anyone would find this interesting.
But I'm glad you like! :) Hope you look forward to the future chapters!

[erikaoi]

Interesting.update soon

[tiniedoll]

Thanks for reading & commenting! :D
Hope you look forward to the future chaps then! :)

[usoshigo]

This sounds so damn good!
Keep up with the writing :3

[tiniedoll]

Awww, thank you! :D
Hope you're looking forward to the future chapters!

spot!

[dyealer]

Anyone interested in reading more? <--- I know I am! -excited smile-
I cant wait to see the progress of the story!and its been so interesting...

“Hey, little kid.” Seunghyun tried to greet as friendly as possible. “Can I play tag, too? I’ll be it, you just have to touch me.” <--- nice approach, NOT! XD that is funny!I imagine him saying that in his oh-so-deep-seductive voice, if girls maybe they'll like it[They'll love it] but if on a guy, really that just creepy!

Cant wait for the update! :)

Re: spot!

[tiniedoll]

Hehe, thanks!
I wasn't sure if anyone would be interested cause Top's little phobia/disorder is quite strange and sounds like unrealistic, lmao!

& haha, ikr? XD If Top ever said that to me, it would be my pleasure >w<

Glad you like it! <3

[undying_desire]

Dawww~ this is cute in a really weird way. Makes me think of Takumi-kun with the fear of being touched and all. xD Jiyong has got to think Seunghyun is creeping on him though. *lol* I mean first he was mistaken for a girl, then Seunghyun gawking as he's peeing, and then wanting Jiyong to touch him? That just seems so funny. I'd love to read more.

[tiniedoll]

Hehe, I have a knack for fluffy stuff :)
Ohh, is Takumi from a manga? Cause I would definitely read it!

& haha yeah! XD I hope things between them will be funny later on ♫ Hope you look forward for more!

Thanks for reading & commenting! :D

[undying_desire]

Yup, Takumi-kun is a manga. And it's a live action drama too. ^^

I'll definitely look forward to more of this series. *Bows*