legend of korra: look back but don't stare

[orchida]

Characters/pairings: Asami, Bolin, Korra, Mako. Makorra/Masami.
Summary: Asami isn't sure where she fits in really.

Comments

[seemslikeaporno]

Sigh, I really like your writing style. Wow, it's just - it's really, really pretty and it flows really well. I just really enjoy it.

And you somehow succeeded in making me read this even though it's Borra/Asami? I mean, I dislike the pairing with a passion, but I never really thought about them having a decent friendship until I read this. I didn't even realize how much I liked them as Ultimate Bros 4 Lyfe until I read this, so. Thanks for that, haha.

Ugh, the interactions between Mako and Asami made my heart hurt. You have them both characterized perfectly, in my opinion. And Asami's willingness to grit her teeth and deal is something that I really like about her in the show, so I'm really glad you carried it over in this fic. She's a really strong character, and you've portrayed that through her interactions with all three members of Team Avatar in this little story, and it was really nice. Wonderful work, really

[orchida]

Thank you very much for such a lovely comment.

And haha, the latest trailer just gives me feelings and whilst it'll probably not happen, I kind of hope the two of them go off to take on her Dad together as Mako and Korra have their own adventure. I can't particularly say that I ship them, but you have no idea how close I came to writing it with this.

And no, no, no, hearing you like my writing and characterisations makes everything completely worthwhile, thanks for taking the time to leave your thoughts on everything.