Comments | riastarstruck: [FIC] Those Left Behind

riastarstruck

[FIC] Those Left Behind

May 29, 2010 13:34

Title - Those Left Behind
Author -RiaStarStruck
Rating - PG
Warnings -unbeta’d, angst
Summery -“ Missy watched them through the half open doorway of her bedroom...” Ville and Bam’s secret love from the POV of one intimately involved -Missy.
Disclaimer -I don’t own any of the people featured in this story, any products or brands. I own only the order of ( Read more... )

oneshot, outside pov, slash, [fic], vam

Comments 10

meduusje May 29 2010, 07:28:31 UTC

poor everyone
love sucks sometimes...
and hurts way too badly
but loved it nonetheless

irena_aneri May 29 2010, 15:03:28 UTC

It is huge, don't know why. I really loved this, and OHE. I kind of (reallyreallyseriouslrealy)want you to continue this. A lot. It's beautifully written. =]

nicotiana666 May 30 2010, 13:11:10 UTC

I really second to that.

I would really like to see where this would go.

fleur_de_ylang May 29 2010, 23:15:05 UTC

This one was pretty sad and up-setting for everyone involved. What a messy situation. To be in Missy´s shoes .....no thank you. Bloody masochistic position to be in.....being always the second one, always just the more convenient one, always less loved one.

It has so much potential to evolve further. What do you think?

I hope you get better soon. lol

riastarstruck June 1 2010, 08:11:05 UTC

yes, affairs are so messy, emotions make everything so complicated, and someone always ends up getting hurt.
i agree though, i would hate to be in Missy's shoes. but i do think bam loves her in this, its just not as soul shattering as his devotion to Ville, but i definatly think theres love.

not sure if this one will evolve further, i have nothing planned for it, but who knows what the future will bring.
thanks for the comment!

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riastarstruck June 1 2010, 08:08:41 UTC

lol yeah, i think Missy's POV is an interesting take on Vam, lol, she's kinda involved whether she wants to be or not :P

have_666_mercy May 30 2010, 04:09:29 UTC

I love the way you are setting the scene here. I can see how you had written this first before the other. And I hope you will continue writing this because you have a way of writing where so many words are expressed with such small meaningful motions and few words spoken.

riastarstruck June 1 2010, 08:07:56 UTC

thank you so much for the lovely comment.
lol it never actually hit me before your comment that i really dont use many spoken words, how odd.
i'm not sure if i will continue this one, i might much later if something strikes me, but for the time i think it and OHE are happily standing together
thanks for the comment!