[FIC] Friends

[riastarstruck]

so i havent really been posting or going on vam for a while, been despiratly trying to get all my work done for the end of uni, you know the deal: panicing, swearing, tearing my hair out, holding back the tears....
To make matters SO much better i have crippled myself, i am without a right hand (yes, i am right handed) for three more weeks, as in

Comments

[alicez17]

Wow, this was pretty damn deep.

I actually really liked this for the fact that it was more of a 'character study' (Bam in this case) than it was about the vam. You portrayed Bam's feelings very accurate, in a subtle kind of jealousy.

I think this is very similar to how their relationship is (except for the part where they fuck, since there is no evidence for that). Good job:)

[riastarstruck]

thank you dear!
i wanted it to be a subtle jealousy, not an ugly, in your face green eyed monster. i get the feeling that if bam was jealous of mige and ville's relationship he would know perfectly well that it was stupid, but still not be able to hold it back all the time.

what can i say? i like character studies, they give new dimensions to characters, which i love.
thanks for the wonderful comment!

[cherimorton]

oh how i've missed you! sorry about your hand, i hope your better soon so you can give us more angsty awesomeness! this piece hurt my soul in a good way... like a gnawing ache that's eased by seeing the smile of the one who is loved :) nice job, sweetness!

[riastarstruck]

aww thank you so much! sorry i hurt your soul, but sometimes thats the best part!
and dont worry, i have some angst boiling away in the back of my head, i'm sure one of the many stories i'm slowly working on will break your heart!

[calvaryscars]

I was wondering where you went to!

I absolutely adored this. It was not badly written, in fact, just the opposite! Wonderful!

I hope your hand gets better darling :( &hearts!

[riastarstruck]

lol yeah, i had to post this as a kind of "I'm still here! dont forget me!" despite my doubts with it (all aliviated now, thanks to the lovely comments!)
glad you liked it!
and i'm begging it to, though it doesnt seem to be working *pouts*
thanks for the comment!

[swirlsandstars]

They were friends; friends who occasionally indulged the more primal elements of the human condition when they were safe under the warm blanket of intoxication and solitude.

Best line ever. You pretty much summed the whole idea of vam up right there and then :) I love this, I really do. You can see how close Mige and Ville are, in a completetly different way from Ville and Bam. I love how you portrayed the jealousy, and all the little question and ideas that had been gnawing away at Bam, even though he never got the guts to ask. It was sad, but it felt honest as hell, which is always a good thing. Realistic, beautiful and heart-wrenching as always my dear :) Love both to this and to you! :D <3

[riastarstruck]

*beams* thanks so much sweetheart! fantastic ego boosting comment right there!
i love mige and ville's relationship, i find it just so remarkable and beautiful watching its like, watching the ideal friendship, and the contrast with ville and bams relationship is so striking i HAD to do something about it.
i'm glad it worked and you liked it! thanks again!

[riastarstruck]

thanks so much! i'm so happy you liked it!