Fic: Good Things (PG, Peter/Claire)

[riane_71]

IMPORTANT AUTHOR NOTE: This story can now be found at my other LJ: ridley1013
(Also, I have no idea why the LJ cut looks so funky here...)

Title: Good Things

Author: riane_71 ridley1013

Rating: PG

Fandom: Heroes

Pairing: Claire, a little bit of Noah, Paire

Disclaimer: I don’t own them (if I did, Peter & Claire would so not be related)

Summary: Claire

Comments

[nayden]

wow, intense and for a first fic that was remarkable. It was descriptive and moving. I totally loved it and it was definitely something I could see happening. I bring carrots for your plot bunnies because I for one would lurve to read more fics from you. Hurry back. Thanks for sharing ^_^

Whew!

[riane_71]

Thanks!

Can't tell you how nervous I was to post this. My butterflies had butterflies. I'm glad you liked it.

The plot bunnies thank you as well - they need all the carrots they can get. LOL.

Re: Whew!

[nayden]

are you kidding me? absolutely nothing there to get nervous about, although I know how you feel. I still get that way but you have no reason to be ^_^ aww no probs, would gladly share my carrots with ya.

[nmidian]

Hey there! This is a great piece, and you're right, feels like a part of something bigger. So go for it. ;)

Also, I would like to encourage you to visit the pairechallenge community at LJ. I think this fic would be a great entry for the last challenge we have going on, before it's closed, as it goes around the word 'reunion'.

Kudos
Nick Midian

[riane_71]

Thanks so much!

I've been reading the stuff over at pairechallenge (you guys rock, by the way) this week and thought this might work for the reunion challenge. I just joined but it looks like that particular challenge is now closed. That's okay though. Maybe I can pull something together for the current one.

[ladycat713]

Very well done. You portrayed Claire's anxiety and impatience vividly.

[riane_71]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

[rec_goddess]

That was very good. I especially enjoyed your characterization of Noah. I'd like to think he would approve of Claire and Peter's relationship.

Keep it up! I'd really like to see more.

[riane_71]

Thanks. Noah is one of my favorite characters on the show & I'm thrilled I got his "voice" right.

[dragonydreams]

That was such a great reunion. Claire's anxiety was palatable. Loved when they finally saw each other.

[riane_71]

I'm thrilled to hear that! I was afraid it would come across as cheesy (or worse, overdramatic). I'm so glad it turned out the way it did. Thanks!