Fic: Innocence Like Hers (RPFS || Demi/Selena || NC-17)

[rhysdux]

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A breathless gasp broke the silence of the darkened room, followed by a deep moan. With only the blue glow emanating from the skewed laptop screen, dangling dangerously on the edge of the desk, the silhouettes of two bodies could be seen moving in tandem atop ruffled sheets. Another moan vibrates

Comments

[perfectly_vague]

So.. aside from being the single HOTTEST fics I've ever read, it's easily one of the best written as well. From concept to theme and execution, you created an incredibly detailed, plausible series of events in the world and mindset that they live in and as much as most of the content was smut, there was so much behind it. This was, in a word, brilliant. You are incredibly talented.

[demselfan]

holy jesus
dat was.....AWESOME!!!
tottally hot, good thing i dont have a doctors appointment, or have to have my temp checked cause damn it would b sky high!

[trainwreck1989]

I felt the need to smoke a cig after reading that. That was so hot and so sweet. I liked the feelings it had not just sex you know. it was great. I absolutely loved it. and i think i died reading it!

[livrockluv32]

So they lay there, tucked into each other where everything fits just right, and look at each other with pure untainted love in their eyes, because tomorrow, everything starts out innocent enough.

Everything started out innocent enough, but it was never innocent to begin with.

Love, love, love, LOVE those lines. This was amazing and so beautifully written. It was hot and sexy but not over-the-top or raunchy. Just the right amount of lust and love. Great, great work!!!!

[krackel20]

i felt the room getting hotter as i continued reading, that was so beautiful (i'm seriously considering putting shorts on right now).
i have no words cause i'm so blown away, everything was so perfect.

i feel like my reply is very inadequate for such an amazing fic.