Canaries

May 04, 2009 17:51



The artificial birds she produces are yellow in colour, their chirps and tweets cutting through the stale air like swords.

A few days ago, their song had been beautiful.  She’d been the only one in the class with the ability to produce them, and their elegant yellowy feathers had shined.

Now, in the aftermath of their most explosive row yet, the ( Read more... )

comfort, rating: g, author: subtlynice, genre: angst

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mugglemama May 4 2009, 17:01:56 UTC
Lovely! It is often forgotten she did not conjure the birds for the purpose of attacking him, she was alone with them before Harry (and Ron and Lavender) arrived. You have done a masterful job creating that image of her seeking solace and companionship. More R/Hr from you, if you please!

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subtlynice May 4 2009, 17:14:02 UTC
Thanks! I love writing missing moments, and there's so much scope for them in the books. I've recently become addicted to writing drabbles, so it's safe to assume I'll be writing more R/Hr drabbles soon. ;)

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hpuckle May 4 2009, 18:09:06 UTC
Beautiful missing moment, this is perfect. I agree, definitely more from you soon please! You're welcome here anytime :)

xxx

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subtlynice May 4 2009, 18:22:02 UTC
Thanks! I've been a lurker on this comm for over a year now, and kept meaning to post something, but it's only recently that I've become obsessed with drabble writing. I'm glad you liked it! :)

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subtlynice May 5 2009, 12:10:19 UTC
Thanks! :D

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i_m_b00 May 8 2009, 02:05:31 UTC
prefect well played

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subtlynice May 8 2009, 08:22:11 UTC
Thanks! (And I love the icon!)

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