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mugglemama in rhr100

This Is My Reality

Jan 23, 2009 00:18

I wake with a start. Breath in, out. I remind myself:

‘This is real; this is my reality.’

Hermione sleeps beside me, the sheet barely concealing her nakedness.

‘This is my reality.’

It was me she sat astride earlier, falling together into ecstasy. Her full breasts mine for the tasting; her stomach slightly swollen with child … my ( Read more... )

rating: r, terrorize, author: mugglemama, genre: angst

Comments 6

hpuckle January 23 2009, 11:11:41 UTC

Oh! That is PERFECT!

xxx

drcjsnider January 23 2009, 14:54:24 UTC

oh...poor Ron. I certainly hope he doesn't have nightmares forever. well done, though!

greenschist January 23 2009, 17:08:59 UTC

Oooh, so good! Poor Ron.

only_for_one January 23 2009, 21:17:22 UTC

I have to admit that at first I didn't think I'd be impressed with this, but as soon as I read Red not black; blue not green I was impressed. I've never really thought about how Ron would deal with that image in the future, but I think this is a fairly accurate portrayal of the possibility.

In short: Great work! I really liked this!

scribhneoir1 January 25 2009, 17:46:49 UTC

this is a wonderful use of the prompt...original and intriguing.