One fine day (Prompt: Lazy)

[otterandterrier]

Title: One fine day
Prompt: Lazy
Author: otterandterrier 
Rating: G
Word Count (should be 100 words exactly): 100
Warnings: None
Notes: Calmer times, still over the summer after the war. What happens with me? I've been writing about a lovable corny Ron. Ron isn't corny on purpose. I think he doesn't realize how cute he is. And hey, I suck at titles, so I stole this

Comments

[loonynamelass]

Ooh, I love this so much... Usually, people use a trait of Ron's to power their relationship, but here you actually capitalize on Hermione's character, and Ron forcing her to just enjoy the day.

Really, really sweet.

Oh- the whole paragraph thing is technically incorrect (new paragraph for new speaker), but the effect of it stylistically is alright if you mean it that way.

[otterandterrier]

:D Thanks!
Haha, I know--I had to study rules of writing dialogues at uni last year and still have to use them, but I like using different styles for writing, even when they are wrong at first sight ;P