Comments | rhombus_: Lay Me Down (Kyle/Oliver) *WIP*

rhombus_

Lay Me Down (Kyle/Oliver) WIP

Nov 01, 2011 09:32

Story Title: Lay Me Down - Chapter Eleven (*WIP*)
Author's Name: rhombus_
Pairing: Kyle/Oliver
Rating: R
Warnings: AU setting; historical inaccuracies; cliches; coincidences to suspend disbelief
Summary: Kish in the Old West. Yep. That about sums it up. AU (of course).
Disclaimer: Characters ≠ mine.

Previous parts:
Chapter One - The Vow
Chapter Two - Our Own Place
( Read more... )

character: kyle lewis, character: oliver fish, fandom: one life to live, pairing: kyle/oliver, fic: lay me down

Comments 28

adamwolf November 3 2011, 21:01:36 UTC

Oh YES! I keep checking your journal every so often for an update on this story, and I'm so glad you're not leaving it hanging. It's so beautiful. Thank you!

rhombus_ November 3 2011, 22:48:30 UTC

You're welcome. And thank you!

Reader from Canada anonymous November 4 2011, 01:48:10 UTC

I'm so happy that you wrote another chapter :) Yahhhhhhh!!!! I keep checking in to see if there were updates and I was so excited to see another chapter. I'm getting so excited about this plot also. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. keep up the great work. :)

Re: Reader from Canada rhombus_ November 4 2011, 17:01:04 UTC

Thank you so much! :)

mariska_lee November 4 2011, 02:48:58 UTC

Yes! I've been hoping for another chapter!

I need an emoticon for *nervous and squealing with joy at the same time* because Oliver's a deputy now and I'm afraid of what's going to happen when we catch up with the beginning of Chapter One.

And I think I've said this before, but reading your story makes me wish I could draw. You've got scenes in here that would make such great visuals, and if I had any artistic skills at all I'd be begging to do artwork for each chapter. With this chapter it would be that last scene, for that moment just before Kyle turns around when Oliver's in the doorway. I love that whole scene. :)

Now I'm going to go crawl into the corner and wish for Kish to have some happiness. *wishes*

rhombus_ November 4 2011, 17:09:33 UTC

Yes, we are very close to catching up...

Thank you so much for reading/commenting. I love hearing what scenes resonate with people (and how cool is it that you see them illustrated like that?). :D

Reader from China anonymous November 6 2011, 09:59:40 UTC

Finally, finally!!!! I was starting thinking you've quit this story, like Kyle gave up on Olli. Lucky for all of us, you and Olli got something in common, you both came around. I'm going out for job for a month, this chapter is gonna make this month less boring and more sweet. I'll left my comment when I get back. Love U!

Re: Reader from China rhombus_ November 7 2011, 18:22:38 UTC

Aww. I hope I never, ever abandon this little tale. Thanks so much for commenting. Your enthusiasm makes me want to write much faster for the next chapter. :)

anonymous November 9 2011, 21:19:31 UTC

I'm so gald that you have posted a new chapter and I'm really excited about the plot. I thought you might have given up on this but I'm really happy to see that you are keeping it up. i'm going to selfishly ask when is the next chapter coming? I can't wait to read it. Thanks :)

rhombus_ November 9 2011, 22:14:44 UTC

Thanks! Haven't given up, and hope I never will. :D

As far as the ETA of the next chapter... I hope to have some free time in a few weeks (after the holiday weekend)... I'm aiming for around then. It probably will come faster than this last one did. Or at least I hope it does! :)