Comments | rhombus_: Lay Me Down (Kyle/Oliver) *WIP*

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Lay Me Down (Kyle/Oliver) WIP

Jan 16, 2011 22:49

Story Title: Lay Me Down - Chapter Nine (*WIP*)
Author's Name: rhombus_
Pairing: Kyle/Oliver
Rating: R
Warnings: AU setting; historical inaccuracies; cliches; old timey racism
Summary: Kish in the Old West. Yep. That about sums it up. AU (of course).
Disclaimer: Characters ≠ mine.

Previous parts:
Chapter One - The Vow
Chapter Two - Our Own Place
( Read more... )

character: kyle lewis, character: oliver fish, fandom: one life to live, pairing: kyle/oliver, fic: lay me down

Comments 10

dragonmage86 January 18 2011, 08:00:27 UTC

Awwwwwww....
Poor boys. Poor kyle.

So glad to see this back on my flist.

rhombus_ January 18 2011, 16:52:14 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you're glad!

These poor guys. It's not going to get any easier for them any time soon, either... ;)

_justwords_ January 24 2011, 09:35:30 UTC

I've just read the whole story (so far) in one go, and it is fabulous! I love Oliver and Kyle and their whole relationship and the world you created for them. Excellent work! I can't wait to read more. :)

rhombus_ January 24 2011, 20:25:38 UTC

Thanks so much! :) I love hearing that people are still finding this one.

Hopefully the next part will be ready soon-ish...

pjvilar April 22 2011, 01:43:57 UTC

I'm really enjoying this! Looking forward to more.

rhombus_ April 22 2011, 02:57:39 UTC

Thanks! After a short break, I'm finally back to working on the next chapter. Fingers crossed that it'll be ready soon. :)

Reader from China anonymous July 29 2011, 10:48:38 UTC

I have to say this fiction made me addicted!Yesterday my crappy web wire went wrong again, and I almost went crazy for I couldn't read chapter9 for the night. Well, keep working awesome! I'm really looking fore ward how the story would go. And Please! Don't end as a tragedy~~
Love you!

Re: Reader from China rhombus_ July 29 2011, 17:55:31 UTC

Thank you so much for your comment. :) I, too, am hoping for a happy ending.

I've been working on chapter 11 for a while now, but real life has interrupted my progress. Hopefully it'll get done in the next few weeks. Thanks again!

Re: Reader from China anonymous July 30 2011, 17:24:52 UTC

Why can't I read the whole Chapter10 here? I could have, but now I can't. The end is missing, and I can't leave comments. Lucky for me I saved it weeks ago.

WTH, I'll just say what I wanna say here. When I first saw this title "Lay Me Down", frankly speaking, I wasn't exactly pure intended. I thought with such an erotic title, there must be something dirty.
Now I feel shame for myself. 'Coz after reading C10, I understand now. If you wish to lay down with someone you love, you need a lot of courage, especially when it comes to situation like Kish. At the end of C10 Olli was scared, threaten by death. Guess we all would. And that's just why I love this fiction, for it makes me feel it real life u were writing. Nicely done!

Re: Reader from China rhombus_ July 30 2011, 20:23:18 UTC

There may be a little dirty coming down the pipeline... though it could be four or five chapters away... :)

The title is taken from the song that inspired my first idea for the fic: "Lay Me Down" by The Dirty Heads. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ow60y4WHePQ

It has more relevance later on. This backstory has taken on a life of its own! Thanks for reading and commenting. I love hearing from readers. :D