Hmm...

[rhienelleth]

So, after writing almost a thousand words, having Reaper tell me very clearly that this just wasn't working for him, and rewriting them all, I think I finally have something going here.

Reaper didn’t need Ghost to tell him about the fifteen to twenty shock troops moving on their position.  He could focus through the block, feel the eighteen

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[kistha]

MORE!!!!

*ahem* We now return you to your regular broadcast station.

[rhienelleth]

There is more! I am working on it. With any luck, I'll be posting it sometime in the next hour or so.

[kistha]

YEA!

[rhienelleth]

With any luck, I'll be posting it sometime in the next hour or so.

Or, sometime tonight. I do intend to finish this chapter tonight, period. And it's close.