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rhienelleth

Drabble - Iron Man

Jun 07, 2008 21:49

So, this is a drabble for
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fic, drabble, movie-ironman

Comments 59

lady_s June 8 2008, 15:15:50 UTC

That was really cute. I enjoyed it so much. Too bad they didn't kiss, though. ;)

rhienelleth June 8 2008, 16:30:35 UTC

Thank you! A kiss, well, Pepper wouldn't cooperate. Tony makes her too nervous. :) But there will be a kiss in their future...among other things.

lady_s June 8 2008, 20:32:25 UTC

THe future? I thought this was a one-shot. There's more? Excellent!!!

rhienelleth June 8 2008, 21:13:22 UTC

Well....yes. It kind of is. Except Tony really, really wants to know what Pepper wears under all those designer suits. I don't think he's going to shut up until I let him find out. :-)

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jenab June 8 2008, 15:29:24 UTC

Very lovely and fantastic. I love the UST between Tony and Pepper

rhienelleth June 8 2008, 16:34:47 UTC

Thank you! :-)

amonitrate June 8 2008, 15:38:44 UTC

For the rest of the day, she wouldn’t stop thinking about Tony Stark, beneath his carefully tailored Armani suit, going commando.

Best last line ever!

Really, I enjoyed Pepper and how flustered Tony makes her. And yeah, I'd totally wonder what the flowers meant if I were her:)

rhienelleth June 8 2008, 16:47:55 UTC

Thank you! I think Tony enjoys flustering Pepper. ;-)

amonitrate June 8 2008, 16:48:29 UTC

Oh, clearly.

ancarett June 8 2008, 15:53:40 UTC

I love, love, love this short story. Heck, if this is what comes of a drabble prompt for you, I'm in awe! Really wonderful sexual tension and great fun with the characters. Well done!

rhienelleth June 8 2008, 16:53:12 UTC

LOL - I so suck at drabbles! This is a longstanding truth. A thousand words is pretty much my minimum, and (as this story proves) often I can't even stick to that.

Thank you, I'm really glad you loved it. :-D

staarss June 8 2008, 15:54:10 UTC

Ok, so I found myself yelling at my dog to leave my room as I read your fic--i didnt want to be disturbed! You are EXCELLENT as UST and building up tension...i can only imagine what you can do with bringing that tension to a conclusion--and trust me, i will imagine...have you written any other IRON MAN stories? or for any other fandoms? i would love to see what else you've done!

thanks for the inspiration to continue my UST-enhanced story!

rhienelleth June 8 2008, 17:07:02 UTC

Thank you thank you! Wow, what a compliment! :)

I haven't (yet) written any other Iron Man, but I'm pretty sure I will - all that UST needs a conclusion. (Plus, Tony will not rest until he's seen for himself what Pepper wears under all those suits.)

I've written fic in other fandoms - here, in my memories, and most of my Alias fic is here.