Fic: Secrets, SCC Derek/Sarah

[rhienelleth]

Title: Secrets
Author: Rhien Elleth
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Derek/Sarah
Word Count: 9,950
Spoilers: through season one
Disclaimer: Don't own them, don't profit, just fun and entertaining, nothing to see here, etc
Beta: Thanks to

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[flighty_dreams]

Loved it!

I've been craving some good Sarah/Derek fic that actually deals with her past with Kyle--from Kyle being John's dad to what he meant to Sarah, and how her previous relationship with Kyle affects Derek and Sarah in the present. B/c of course he's going to wonder how he compares to Kyle in her eyes. There's baggage there to deal with.

So yes, great job. As someone else mentioned, I thought it really fit the tone of the show. And nice work on the back and forth angst and tension. It even made me tear up.

I hope you write more! I don't want it to be just a one time thing. They do need to hash out some of their issues, that's for sure. I think he needs to know that she only knew Kyle for a couple days. There's really a lot he could tell her about his brother. Not to mention, I think she'd love to see him playing with Kyle in the park too.

Re: feedback

[rhienelleth]

Oh, thank-you! I am a fan of the movies and of Sarah/Kyle. I couldn't possibly have written Sarah/Derek without Kyle baggage, LOL.

I hope you write more! I don't want it to be just a one time thing. They do need to hash out some of their issues, that's for sure. I think he needs to know that she only knew Kyle for a couple days.

I have definite intentions of writing more, and hashing out many of their issues ~ over time, anyway.

Thanks again for the lovely feedback. :-)

[un4scene]

This was so very lovely, thank you for sharing it. You really have their voices and the atmosphere down perfectly. Nice realistic angsty finish too, no happy endings here it seems.

[rhienelleth]

No, these two definitely didn't have 'happy ending' in them. I don't know if they ever will, not just because of their baggage, but their situation, the fact that it seems neither survives into the future, etc. Dark and angsty are Sarah/Derek.

And thank you!

[ancarett]

Oh, my. I don't think I could love this any more. It's just perfect. There's pain and heat and angst galore and so much brutal honesty in the two of them that I want to go back and re-read the story all over again, now.

Thanks for sharing this!

[rhienelleth]

Oh, my. I don't think I could love this any more. It's just perfect. There's pain and heat and angst galore and so much brutal honesty in the two of them that I want to go back and re-read the story all over again, now.

I think that's the very best compliment a writer can receive ~ thank-you very much! I hope you enjoy it as much the second time around. :)

[mspooh]

*GLEES!*

It's even better the, uh... actually, I lost count at how many times I've read this, but it's more awesome every time. Oh, the angst. *hearts you*

9,950 words? Only? What happened to the last 50? :P

[rhienelleth]

Those are the fifty I cut after your beta, you know, the ones slashed with your red pen? *kidding*

*hearts you back*

You're just reading the p0rn, aren't you? ;-P

[mspooh]

Well, maybe not the first two times, but now... *whistles innocently*

Hee.

[superstitiousme]

i really enjoyed this! awesome, angsty and hot. :)

Thanks for sharing! ♥

[rhienelleth]

Ah, thanks! :-)