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Fic - Four Times Jack Didn’t Really Kiss One of His Team Members and One Time He Did

Mar 20, 2007 22:57

Four Times Jack Didn’t Really Kiss One of His Team Members and One Time He Did
Author: Rhiannon - rhian_morwenna
Fandom: Torchwood
Characters: Torchwood Team; Jack/Ianto
Summary: Jack didn’t really kiss his team members on four separate occasions and one time he definitely did.
Word Count: 1,809
Genre: gen, slash
Rating: R/Mature (swearing, innuendo - this IS ( Read more... )

gwen cooper, jack harkness, 5 things, ianto jones, torchwood team, toshiko sato, owen harper, torchwood, fic

Comments 32

nohara_megami March 24 2007, 03:35:53 UTC

Well done! I had a feeling (and hoped) that the last one would be Jack/Ianto, and it seems that I am not disappointed^_^

rhian_morwenna March 24 2007, 21:55:10 UTC

Thank you! I had to do Jack/Ianto for the one time Jack really did kiss a team member. Ianto would have been jealous if it had been someone else. *grin*

darthhellokitty March 24 2007, 05:43:38 UTC

Oh, I really do like this one - four almost-kisses for four different reasons and then the real one. Fun, and I think you really captured everyone well.

rhian_morwenna March 24 2007, 22:05:26 UTC

Thank you! I wanted to have very different reason and tone for each of the almost-kisses. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

jadesfire March 24 2007, 07:43:45 UTC

This was unusual and clever and so well written. I love the set-up for each, and you caught the tension in each situation so well. I think Owen's was my favourite, for that reason - it's hard to get that kind of feeling without overplaying it, and this was spot on.

Nice work!

rhian_morwenna March 24 2007, 22:12:21 UTC

Thank you very much! I tried to make the set-up just as important as the almost-kiss or the real kiss.

Owen's was the hardest to write, to get the tone just right. I'm glad it worked!

fatchickengirl March 24 2007, 08:28:04 UTC

Loved the Owen bit! All pent up sexual tension,probably why he shouts a lot! Really enjoyed this, anticpation is the sexiest thing.

rhian_morwenna March 24 2007, 22:16:54 UTC

*points to icon* That's pretty much how I see Owen after his almost-kiss. *g*

Thank you for commenting!

crystalshard March 24 2007, 09:25:01 UTC

That was very good, I liked the way you put each of them into different situations for the almost-kiss. Very nicely done.

rhian_morwenna March 24 2007, 22:21:53 UTC

Thanks! The last thing I wanted was four vignettes that were essentially the same.