Fic: No Place Free

Apr 06, 2011 09:11


This took longer than usual, because it's long, and intense, and goes all over the place emotionwise. But it's done... ::wipes forehead::

No Place Free

A Dragon Age 2 fic

God blessed me, I'm a free man
With no place free to go
I'm paralyzed and collared-tight
No pills for what I fear

--Neko Case, I Wish I Was The Moon

A/N: I am deeply grateful for all ( Read more... )

fanfic, dragon age 2

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solan_t April 6 2011, 15:41:48 UTC
Oh, LJ is precarious this morning. Wonder if I will get this comment through.

I find I like that repetition of 'We're done here.', like it's echoing in Hawke's head.

And I SO remember the look on Fenris' face when he realized that all those people were killed because HE was expected. I just wanted to say 'You are not responsible for other people's actions!', but I doubt it would have made any impression anyway. *sad face*

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arysani April 6 2011, 18:41:20 UTC
Heavy. Good, but heavy. No reason for it to be light, not at all, but on the heels of their will-they-won't-they from the night before, this...this is a lot to handle.

Really felt this scene - well done, as I've come to expect from you ;o)

Oh Fenris. Hard to crack that shell, but totally, entirely worth it once you do.

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olnl07 April 6 2011, 20:39:12 UTC
I really liked it. Great Job. Can't wait for the next one.

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