Comments | rheasilvia: Saiyuki Fanfic: Negative Movement

rheasilvia

Saiyuki Fanfic: Negative Movement

Jul 07, 2011 02:43

Disclaimer: Not my characters.
Pairing: Hakkai/Gojyo.
Rating & Warnings: Rated R. Potentially disturbing content; please contact me for details.
Betaed by solo____. Thank you again!
Story notes: Just under 2,500 words. This story is for indelicateink - I hope you like it! :-)

Summary: Gojyo's been feeling kinda off for a couple days or so. Turns out it's not the flu ( Read more... )

fanfic, saiyuki

Comments 34

indelicateink July 7 2011, 00:47:05 UTC

Eeee! omg, this is glorious and wonderful and everything I could've wished for! XD♥♥♥♥♥

I love Gojyo, and Hakkai's solution, and-- everything.

Thank you so very much!

rheasilvia July 7 2011, 01:04:06 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad you like it! :-) Especially after I started suspecting there was some kind of curse on the story. *g* (Seriously, just when I was finally getting ready to post my internet connection suddenly dropped for half an hour or so. It was creepy!!)

Thank you for coming up with the idea for this exchange! I've actually been playing with the thought of this subject for quite a while, so this was a welcome opportunity. I had fun writing this, and I love the T&T picture you made for me!

jessiedark July 7 2011, 01:22:55 UTC

I really liked that. I really really liked it.

rheasilvia July 8 2011, 22:00:56 UTC

That's so good to know - thank you for reading! :-) I'm very glad you enjoyed the story!

devikun July 7 2011, 01:24:32 UTC

WOW. Excellent! So visceral and alive and fertil. I'm not sure I can properly articulate all the layers I found while reading it. I really liked the way the sections reminded me of the way a blackout works - snapshots of memory with spaces of lost awareness/consciousness somewhere in between.

I repeat, wow. This was great.

rheasilvia July 8 2011, 22:28:10 UTC

I'm so glad you like it! I feel that this story had to be as visceral as possible in order to work, so it's really great to know it succeeded so well for you in that regard. :-)

I really liked the way the sections reminded me of the way a blackout works - snapshots of memory with spaces of lost awareness/consciousness somewhere in between.

I really can't say anything here but: YAY! *g*

Thank you for your lovely feeback!

lady_ganesh July 7 2011, 02:38:02 UTC

Hakkai is the evilest bastard, and I love him. Excellent work.

rheasilvia July 8 2011, 22:29:31 UTC

He is a bit evil, isn't he... good thing Gojyo likes him like that. ;-)

And good thing you do, too! It's wonderful to know you liked the story. Thank you for letting me know!

lady_ganesh July 8 2011, 22:52:58 UTC

I think he'd insist he gets his work done more effectively that way!

♥

rheasilvia July 8 2011, 22:58:34 UTC

And in the end, results are what count, aren't they? He's sure nobody can argue with that!

laurose8 July 7 2011, 02:54:55 UTC

Who wouldn't be interested to see Gojyo's youkai side? And this is so well pictured, and so well written. Each flavour is excellent.

Your Sanzo and Goku are first rate, too.

rheasilvia July 8 2011, 22:42:28 UTC

Who wouldn't be interested to see Gojyo's youkai side?

I certainly always have been! Considering he's as much youkai as he is human, it always seemed to me like the fact that Gojyo looks human - apart from his coloring - has to be misleading...

Thank you very much for your lovely feedback! It's wonderful to know you enjoyed the story and the characters so much.