A Comedy of Errors

Aug 01, 2009 11:36

Or: Nishikido Ryo's Life as a Korean Drama. Featuring an annoying cast of practical jokers, Eito with an unhealthy interest in other people's love lives, and compulsive snugglers.

Disclaimer: This is pure fiction.
Pairing: Taguchi Junnosuke / Nishikido Ryo
Rating: NC-17 for explicit sex
Betaed by: solo____. Thank you again!
Story notes: Originally ( Read more... )

jpop, fanfic, junno

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bitofajungle August 2 2009, 04:54:11 UTC
that was... the hottest thing I've ever read. And so rediculously cute at the same time. But hot. I thought I was going to faint or something. omg. love. <3

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rheasilvia August 2 2009, 13:42:45 UTC
Yay! I'm really glad the hotness worked so well for you - I'm always a little uncertain whether my sex scenes work, so this is great to hear. And that it was cute, too! :-)

Thank you for your feedback - I'm very happy you enjoyed the story!

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agemaki August 2 2009, 09:41:54 UTC
what can I say? I'm stunned. Who would have thought a story about Junnosuke could be so entertaining, well written, witty and lovely? Wooo. You never end learning.
A wonderful job, it is! Really.

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rheasilvia August 2 2009, 13:44:57 UTC
Yay! I'm very glad you enjoyed the story so much. Thank you very much for letting me know! :-)

And I find that Junno really grows on you if you give him a chance. Like some kind of very cute, very bendy fungus with a penchant for puns. ;-)

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OMG~~~ plumeria_alba August 2 2009, 14:06:37 UTC
They are so cute together ne..and the flow's very good ^ ^
I really miss you and your story <333 (so sad I don't have much time to visit lj like before)

*hugs and ♥*

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Re: OMG~~~ rheasilvia August 2 2009, 14:26:46 UTC
They are indeed very cute together. And singly, too. :-)

Thank you for your lovely feedback - I'm very glad you enjoyed the story! :-)

I really miss you and your story

Ack, no time for fandom? That sucks. But drop by whenever you do have the time to visit LJ. I'll be here! :-)

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renruki August 2 2009, 16:40:20 UTC
Very, very lovely written.
I've never watched a Korean dorama before, but I really loved the pace of your fic.
Choice of words was wonderful, same goes for sentence structures.

For the first time in ages I read the sex scene as a whole and did not skip most of it.

AND: I had wet eyes in the last scene (okay, second to last). Wonderful ending there.

Oh: and I only read this, because I went ROFL about the pairing and wanted to see how this turns out. ^^;;

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rheasilvia August 4 2009, 23:27:01 UTC
I'm very glad you enjoyed the story so much! :-) And knowing Korean dramas really wasn't meant to be a necessary prerequisite for this story - I think anyone who's seen any soaps or read any romance novels should get the idea. *g*

For the first time in ages I read the sex scene as a whole and did not skip most of it.

That's a wonderful compliment! I know the phenomenon you mean... I, too, have been known to page forward through sex scenes, and that it wasn't necessary here is very good to hear.

Also, I am very happy that the ending worked so well for you!

and I only read this, because I went ROFL about the pairing and wanted to see how this turns out.

Thank you for checking out the story despite your initial "wtf?" reaction! *g* I know Junno/Ryo isn't the first pairing that springs to most people's minds, but... well. Don't they go together amazingly well, when you think about it?

Of course, I'm biased. :-)

Thank you very much for your lovely feedback!

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setsuna_jiba August 2 2009, 18:24:02 UTC
First I have to say: I love you for writing this!
When I first saw this pop up in the K8-forum I wasn't really in the mood to read anything. But then I saw your name and thought "wasn't that the author of 'first contact'?" Which meant that I had to read it. That one was epic porn. This was epic cuteness, WITH porn! Amazing porn!
I wanted to list some favourite things but the list became almost as long as the story itself. XD Like:

Maybe it's Jin, that would be cool -
The bed's occupant rolls over and squints at him vaguely. It's Taguchi.
Hell, whatever. That works too.

or

"Where'd Taguchi find your necklace?" Yoko asks, while Ryo puts it on.
"I guess it must have come off in bed," says Ryo. And no wonder, with all the cuddling Taguchi does.
When he looks up, every single member of Kanjani8 is staring at him with the exact same expression of blank astonishment on their faces.
Oh.
Fuck.

This is pure win!

"No, wait! I have a plan. You're messing up my plan!"
"Shut up, you idiot," Junno murmurs against his mouth.
And when Junno ( ... )

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rheasilvia August 4 2009, 23:37:31 UTC
This was epic cuteness, WITH porn! Amazing porn!

Yay! :-)) It's great that the story worked so well for you!

And when Junno wants another round. OMG I almost died!

Looks like Ryo has a strenuous life ahead of him... the poor, poor man. *g*

And the parts with the rest of K8 LOOOOOOOVE!!! Subaru FTW!

Go Eito! :-) They are such fun to write, and such fun in general - and if Ryo dares to hope that the teasing and snooping and meddling is mostly over and done with, then, uhm. He'd better think again. *g*

I was so happy to read something of yours again so you can't really blame me for rambling...

Believe me, I'm not blaming you in the least - quite the contrary, thank you for rambling, and feel free to ramble on! :-) It's really wonderful to know that you enjoy my writing so much. Yay!

Thank you very much for your lovely feedback!

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